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Tosid Utalvutok

Name: Tosid Utalvutok “Tosid Ecrufigure”

Faction: none

Rank: hired gun/merc

Species: Human

Age: 19

Sex: male

Height: 5.6ft

Weight: 152lbs

Eyes: aqua/slit

Hair: dark chestnut

Skin: tan

Force Sensitive: yes

Strength’s”” and Weaknesses(): (he is utterly fearless when confronted with danger to the point of lacking common sense.) (Disdains the law). (Sees war as a useful means to an end.) (Angered easily and likes to fight often getting into fights and brawls.) (Failure is unacceptable to him and will even go so far as to sabotage, maim horribly or kill anyone responsible for him lousing even if they are allies) “Views cooperation as a valuable skill worthy of respect.” “Is a valuable tactician using whatever means he can to win.” “he is very good at programming and working with explosive weaponry.” “He is good a thinking in abstract”

Appearance: His medium-length sideburns are braided. His very long mustache is neatly combed. His long beard is braided. His hair is clean shaven. He is muscular. His nose is short. He has a scratchy voice. He has a round chin. His eyelashes are short his slightly wide-set eyes have thin irises. His somewhat short ears are somewhat narrow they look human. He has a Nordic accent.

Ship: none

Kills: none

Bounties: Collected:none

Biography: He personally believes the truth is inviolable regardless of the cost, finds the quest for knowledge to be the very heist value, he values Decorum, Dignity and proper behavior. He desires little for himself in the way of possession’s. he has an active sense of humor. He tends not to reveal personal information. He tends to form only tenuous bonds with people.
Likes others in his culture, he holds craftsmen’s ship to be one of the highest of ideals and celebrates talented artisans and there masterworks, greatly prizes loyalty, values family greatly, sees friendship an one of the finer things in life, really respects those that take there time to master a skill deeply respects those that work hard at there labors, finds merrymaking and partying worthwhile activities, values leisure time, respects commerce and finds nature somewhat disturbing. He does not remember where he is from only his name and has been traveling the stars and living from job to job sense he was about 15 his earliest memories are from when he was growing up on the streets of the planet Coruscant which he is not native to, He dreams of crafting a masterwork of his own one day.
 
Overall very good, but for the bio that's more of a description on what your character like's when it should be more like "Was born..." and a story about your character, to give people reference and for you to give a background to have your character stand on so you can roleplay around that background you gave to them. Also, finding a picture that represents your character makes it a lot easier for other people to visualize your character.
 

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