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Approved Location The Zadimus Estate

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Name: The Zadimus Estate

Intent: To have an ancestral home on Serenno for the Zadimus family, Azriel's personal home after his stasis imprisonment.

Classification: Personal home, Family Estate

Location: On planet Serenno, Nestled on a cliff between two peaks over looking a large valley that is nearly overgrown with forests however there are a few villages around.

Affiliation: The Zadimus family, Azriel Zadimus

Description: The Villa stands on it's own grounds, a rectangular area walled off as it is located on a cliff face, despite it's age and near millennium left unattended it is remarkably well preserved and has an air of aged yet distinguished perseverance about it. Upon arrival at the main gates, Visitors and guests would take a long, paved walkway that leads to the Villa which is flanked on either side by two large ornamental gardens that have small walkway's through them as they provide peace and tranquility to the overall look of the estate. In front of the estates main entrance is a double line of Statues of the greatest of the Zadimus family, from military heroes to political powerhouses.
The main building features the patriarchs quarters along with a large workout/meditation room that can also doubles as an office as there is a large table with an inbuilt control console at it's far end with a grand window looking out through the cliff side, side of the building. It also feature a grand library with a room at the top which can open up it's roof to reveal the night sky on a clear night along with a telescope to star gaze through.
Most of the interior is quite Luxuriously decorated and furnished and features a long hallway from the entrance to a main hall that features paintings of every member of the Zadimus family, ending in a family portrait featuring a child Azriel flanked by his parents and opposite that a portrait of Azriel in adulthood with his piercing and strong gaze seeming to almost follow the one walking passed the portrait, bellow each portrait is a plaque that displays the name of the subject of the portrait as well as the year it was painted.
Upon reaching the main hall one can see it also can serve as a dancing and dinning hall should it's master decide on that, with a throne at the far side overlooking anyone who'd enter the estate. Bellow the estate is a personal Landing pad for Azriels personal ship The Narzire as well as a myriad of guest rooms, servants quarters, vaults, and hidden passages built under it when the estate was built.

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History: The history of the estate is a rather normal one for most of Serenno noble houses though it was a fairly young and lesser house it was well on it's way to become the seventh great house of Serenno through the efforts of Azriels parents.
This however changed when Azriel came into his heritage of being an Energy Vampire and rumors quickly circulated among the locals around the estate that within the estate lived a monster in the guise of a man. In a way this was both false and true but Azriel never killed anyone and rather just left those he fed on disoriented and weak. A decade or so before the clone wars and a year or so before the events of the invasion of Naboo, Azriel was caught by a pair of Jedi women that he had attempted to seduce and then feed on, this made them imprison him on his personal ship and left drifting in space unable to tend to his estate as his parents died five years before the clone wars.
This left the estate alone and empty however due to the rumors circulating about it it was left untouched for nearly a millennium where it persevered in relatively great condition at least on the inside. On the outside it's gardens were overgrown as well as a few of the statues had vines covering them, the main estate however didn't see a single vine crawl passed it's first floor walls.
When Azriel was finally released he wondered the galaxy for around a month before he came back to Serenno to look upon his ancestral and childhood home. Pleased to see it was so well preserved through out the time he was away he bought it and had it restored to it's former glory and stocked with additional features the he knew he'd need, such as a personal landing pad built into the cliff face at the lower levels of the estate. Now it stands as a testament to the perseverance of the Zadimus family as it overlooks the lands around it with a regal and reserved eye.

Links: Inspiration
(if you have a suggestion for what this should be please by all means tell me for I cannot decide, the title can be changed as well can't it?)
 
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But before I actually do so, could you put some breaks in for each paragraph, please. Makes it much easier on the eyes. Or just break some of it into smaller paragraphs. Either way works.

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Azriel Zadimus said:
gardens were overgrown as well as a few of the statues had vines covering them, the main estate however didn't see a single wine crawl passed
Typo here. Think you meant vine, not wine.

The only other thing I need to see is links to the image sources. Other than that looks good.

Also I personally would call it a villa over the other two options. Seems to fit the definition better than the alternatives.

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