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Approved Starship The Will of the Force

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Affiliation: Order of the Silver Jedi
Manufacturer: Rendili
Model: Expungable
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material:
  • Alusteel (hull plating)
  • Crystasteel (viewports)
  • Turadium (Shield towers, blast doors)
Classification: Exploration

Length: 2,800km
Width: 2,800km
Height: 1.5km

Armament:
  • 6 Long Range Tri Ion Cannon Turrets
  • 200 Long Range Turbolaser Cannons
  • 400 turbolaser Cannons
  • 120 Flak Cannons
  • 200 Heavy Laser Cannons
  • 120 Point Defense Cannons
  • 2x Solar Ionization Cannon
Hangar:
Special Features:
Maneuverability: 20
Speed Rating: 19
Hyperdrive Class:
  • Tertiary Class 14 Hyperdrive
Strengths:
  • Heavily Shielded
  • Heavily Armed
Weaknesses:
  • Near Immobile (the hyperdrive has been replaced for storage and power needs, the back ups back up is all that remains and its size keeps it from moving from its location)
  • Slow Moving: This is not a flagship designed to move across a battlefield it is a ship made to be in a location and use its network of stations to coordinate.

Description:
Built by the Silver Jedi and Rendili in secret, the parts of it gathered and designed to face the dangerous Go Nagai and protect the Silver Jedi's territory. The ship is a beast requiring multiple power systems and using a prototype reactor that has been created through extensive testing by the CEO and Silver jedi. The final location of the ship a secret from most of the order buts its role has become known. The Rendili expungable was designed to coordinate battle groups and it does that. From its location using the advanced holographic display tied to the stations, the BAC coordinating everything through slave circuits and commands for minimal crew on ships.

Then the plans were changed, with the re-emergence of the Go Nagai forces and dangerous foes. The ship was moved over to Shri-Tal’s shipyard that Rendili built for them, their forces working to try and help out the planet as they searched for the missing people. A quick amount of work going into their equipment as they brought the ship together and used it to lead the silver jedi fleet provided by Rendili CEO Camellia. The hammerheads working on what they could as the Vitae order came to aid them. The fleet fighting the ancient Ni-Gan ships that while dangerous with their cannons couldn’t protect itself against something able to resist its heavy guns.

The heavily shielded and armored ship is designed to use the monitoring stations to create a holographic display the BAC can use to coordinate within the silver jedi’s sector of space. The massive ship not moving from its location mostly as it got into position using the hull created with stealth materials to hide it away. The layers of shielding and armor to allow it protection against asteroids, a weakened and smaller hyperdrive to make space for reactors and energy setups. The final design from it all came to be quite a sight with the expungable style being used as a large disc with lots of guns.

The levels of the ship have been designed to maximize the space used and places for the different ones who are on it. With the fall of so much of the galaxy and dangerous things popping up the ship was moved and designed to be somewhere secure within the galaxy. The first thing found is the hangar bay that has lifts going up and down to the other levels and provides a large three kilometer room holding the fighters and shuttles. Space for personal ships to enter and refuel on the go. There are internal defenses securing it while the doors of the hangar bay are protected by anti fighter defenses.

The lower levels coming from the hangar bay are mostly maintenance and filtration systems. Other rooms under the bay are designed for hydroponics and creating food to lengthen the time between resupplies while allowing for it to be a self sufficient. The primary power source for the BAC being stationed in the center with a shell that feeds into the CIC command shell. Bilge connections with lifts are attached to the bottom with cannons and defenses allowing larger ships to connect and refueled.

Above the bay is the main suites and sections of the base., the holographic training suite is designed for the teaching what it can to the jedi and rangers stationed there. Rooms for the silver jedi to sleep, mess halls and refreshers. The CIC shell is designed for the BAC and its holographic display of the sector allowing the computer to coordinate their fleets and track movement with the advanced stations feeding as much information to them as it can with slave controls to handle the other ships provided.

The higher levels also house some of the more heavy weapons of the ship, built to defend itself in a siege almost that will be supported by slaved ships and defense fleets. With the shielding designed to withstand the Ni-Gan classes cannon that was tearing apart the ships until their battle over Shri-Tal. There was also a smaller emphasis on comfort with personal touches added to the rooms for the people, tanks for fish and pets, padded and confy chairs with holonet connections.

Development Thread:
Bringing it all together
Experimental Reactor
Advanced Astrometrics Lab
Solid State Hologram Training Suite
Molecular Shielding
Advanced Communications
Advanced Sensors
Solar Ionization Cannon
BAC
Intent: To use our dev threads and build the completed Silver Jedi command ship for monitoring and overseeing Silver Jedi space.
Who Can Use This: Unique (Silver jedi masters/faction admins who know the location)
Primary Source: None
 
[member="Silara"]

It is not a flagship, it is a heavily armed and armored ship constructed by the silver jedi to coordinate and based on a canon design http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Inexpugnable-class_tactical_command_shipjust shorted to conform with starship rules on length. 3000 meters instead of 3200 meters and slightly larger to accommodate changes in technology and equipment after so many years. As none of the classifications fit its role I said command ship but changed to exploration.

It is a destroyer template

Destroyer
Link: http://starwars.wiki.../wiki/Destroyer
Variants: Destroyer, Assault, Carrier, Escort, Exploration, Medical, Patrol, Transport
Average Length: 1000-3000 Meters.



Only Major Factions may own multiple Destroyers.

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Classification: (Destroyer, Assault, Carrier, Escort, Exploration, Medical, Patrol, Transport)

Length: (Via Metric System. Max: 3000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 1137 meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 1600 meters, Allegiance-class Battlecruiser: 2200 meters)
Width: (Via Metric System. Max: 3000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 548 meters meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 900 meters, Allegiance-class Battlecruiser: 1100 meters)
Height: (Via Metric System. Max: 3000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 268 meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 400 meters, Allegiance-class Battlecruiser: 450 meters)

Armament: (You may provide your armament in list format and/or provide your vessel an Armament Rating on a scale of 0-20, where 0 is no weapons, 1 is very light weapons, 5 is light weapons/light defense, 10 is medium weapons/medium defense, and 20 is heaviest weapons/heaviest defense. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry and cannot be written as anything other than it, unless the ship also has special weapons. Links: Armament Rating, Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Standardized Load Outs)

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Special Features: (Provide all of your submission's special features, including non-combat items and special weapons, here in a list. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Shields, Engines)

Maneuverability: ( The lower the number, the more maneuverable the ship. How agile is your ship? Can it take tight turns? Please provide your vessel a Maneuverability Rating on a scale 0-20, with 1 being crazy agile like a TIE Interceptor, 10 being average, and 20 being slower to turn than a bantha.)
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Quenladose said:
It is not a flagship, it is a heavily armed and armored ship constructed by the silver jedi to coordinate and based on a canon design http://starwars.wiki...al_command_shipjustshorted to conform with starship rules on length. 3000 meters instead of 3200 meters and slightly larger to accommodate changes in technology and equipment after so many years. As none of the classifications fit its role I said command ship but changed to exploration.
Flagship
Link: http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Flagship
Variants: Battlecruiser, Dreadnaught, Super Star Destroyer, Command Ship, Assault Carrier
Average Length: 2000-5000 Meters.
Flagships range from 2000-5000 meters, not 3200 and above.

Flagships

1. Only Major Factions may own Flagships.

2. Flagships are a prefix located in the Star Wars: Open Role-Playing forum.

3. The requirements of the Flagship thread are as follows:

a. The thread must be a minimum of 400 posts.

b. There must be at least 7 writers actively involved in the thread.

c. The thread is public and is open to any other Major Faction to join.

d. The production - or possession - of the Flagship must be the thread's major focal point.

5. No player may captain a ship over 3,000 meters without the Major Faction Owner's consent.

6. No ship over 3,000 meters will be approved for any Major Faction without a completed Flagship thread.

7. Each Flagship must be labeled Unique.
The above rules are mandatory for any ship above 3000 meters, not any ship that states to be a flagship. As this ship is literally at 3000 meters with over 10,000 guns (which will need to be lowered dramatically regardless of being a flagship or not), multiple advanced special features, stealth coating, the absolute maximum (reaching the maximum of a flagship as well) squadron count (that will need to be changed due to vague listing of 24 "personal ships") and the role of this ship as a command ship over the Silver Jedi Order Fleet.

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon
Starwars Chaos

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
  • Reduce size of ship to a reasonable size (2900 is fine, but 3000 is pushing the exact limit of what is required for a flagship thread and what is up to judge's discretion)
  • Reduce armaments to something reasonable (Reduce it to what you believe is reasonable for a ship of this size with the special features requested and it will be evaluated after all edits are made).
  • Remove the Nightshadow Hull coating or the Molecular shielding, or any two other advanced features.
  • Reduce hangar size to accommodate no more than 8 squadrons, unless you plan to drastically reduce the armaments from what would be the average for this size ship.
WITH DEV THREADS
  • Complete a 400 post flagship development thread with 7 other writers and follow the listed requirements for the flagship rules listed both above and in the starship rules in the Starship section of the factory.
  • Reduce armaments considerably to reflect a rational amount of weapons, as well as correct issues with non-existent weapon types (Octuple Quad Turbolasers do not exist, the "count" before Turbolaser is the definition of how many turbolasers are mounted into a single turret, a quad is 4, Octuple is 8). The first listed weapon alone is 3200 capital guns and exceeds the largest known armament listing on the site.
  • Decrease hangar amount depending on the amount of armaments retained. You will not be retaining a maximum hangar with a maximum amount of armaments.
  • Comb through special features and ensure they are at least mentioned in any development threads listed. Some of these development threads provided are not up to par for quality to be used as development threads.
SUGGESTIONS
  • Do not try to push the limits of what is acceptable.​
 
Even with its nerfs this ship is still -extremely- powerful, probably one of the strongest on the board. I'm still going to approve it because you have doubtlessly put work and effort into it, however, remember that any abuse of this will see serious reprimand.

Approved.
 
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