Thalan Vesh
Neti
The wind on Vannar’s Moon moved like an old, half-forgotten song—thin, cracked, and carrying more sorrow than melody. It drifted across the dead plains and scraped along the body of Master Thalan Vesh, rasping over his bark-like skin as though trying to carve new scars where countless old ones already lived.
He welcomed the sensation.
Pain, at least, was honest.
Thalan stood alone on the ridge, a dark shape against a red horizon that looked perpetually bruised. The war had ended, or so the galaxy liked to claim, but the quiet after war always felt like the hush after a scream—the sort that leaves the air tasting of ghosts.
He lowered himself slowly, limbs groaning like old trees bowing in a storm, and pressed his roots—once legs—into the cracked soil. The world was dry, starved of rain, starved of warmth. The Force beneath the surface pulsed faintly, like a dying heartbeat muffled beneath layers of dust and memory.
So much like me, he thought.
He drew deeper, listening. The Force here was not peaceful; it was brittle. Fractured. Like shards of glass half-buried in the ground. For a moment he let it wash through him. It whispered of hunger, of abandonment, of something left too long in darkness.
And then he felt a flicker.
A seed of something alive.
Small. Wild. Afraid.
He almost recoiled. The last time he had felt something that bright… it had burned him to the core. He still carried the echo of that fire—the moment El’varin had fallen, disappearing into a brilliance that had consumed friend and foe alike.
The memory rose like a flare behind his closed eyes.
Her laugh, startled and bright as shattered sunlight.
Her hand slipping from his.
Her voice—a single breath—“Live, Thalan.”
The Force had not been poetic that day. Only cruel.
The wind shifted, sharp and sudden. Somewhere beyond the ridge came a thin sound, stretched nearly to breaking. A cry. It cut through the stillness like a blade through brittle wood.
For a moment he did not move.
Movement meant responsibility.
Responsibility meant remembering what he had failed to protect.
But the cry came again—smaller, rawer this time—and something older than trauma stirred within him. Not the Jedi training. Something more primal. A root-deep instinct.
Slowly, heavily, he rose.
He welcomed the sensation.
Pain, at least, was honest.
Thalan stood alone on the ridge, a dark shape against a red horizon that looked perpetually bruised. The war had ended, or so the galaxy liked to claim, but the quiet after war always felt like the hush after a scream—the sort that leaves the air tasting of ghosts.
He lowered himself slowly, limbs groaning like old trees bowing in a storm, and pressed his roots—once legs—into the cracked soil. The world was dry, starved of rain, starved of warmth. The Force beneath the surface pulsed faintly, like a dying heartbeat muffled beneath layers of dust and memory.
So much like me, he thought.
He drew deeper, listening. The Force here was not peaceful; it was brittle. Fractured. Like shards of glass half-buried in the ground. For a moment he let it wash through him. It whispered of hunger, of abandonment, of something left too long in darkness.
And then he felt a flicker.
A seed of something alive.
Small. Wild. Afraid.
He almost recoiled. The last time he had felt something that bright… it had burned him to the core. He still carried the echo of that fire—the moment El’varin had fallen, disappearing into a brilliance that had consumed friend and foe alike.
The memory rose like a flare behind his closed eyes.
Her laugh, startled and bright as shattered sunlight.
Her hand slipping from his.
Her voice—a single breath—“Live, Thalan.”
The Force had not been poetic that day. Only cruel.
The wind shifted, sharp and sudden. Somewhere beyond the ridge came a thin sound, stretched nearly to breaking. A cry. It cut through the stillness like a blade through brittle wood.
For a moment he did not move.
Movement meant responsibility.
Responsibility meant remembering what he had failed to protect.
But the cry came again—smaller, rawer this time—and something older than trauma stirred within him. Not the Jedi training. Something more primal. A root-deep instinct.
Slowly, heavily, he rose.