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Approved Starship The Vindictive

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Kei Raxis

The Dead One
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: The Fel Empire
  • Affiliation: The Fel Empire | [member="Jaster Awaud"]
  • Model: N/A
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Durasteel, Transparisteel, Copper, Tin, Duranium Ship Materials
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Missle Deactivation Transmitter
  • Meditation Sphere
  • Workshops
  • Socket Guard
  • Communication Wave De-scramber
  • Encryption Module
  • Frequency Jammer
  • Holonet Transiever
  • Hyperwave Tranceiver
  • Life Support
  • Inertial Damper
  • Life form Indicator
  • Aural Sensor
  • Com-Scan
  • Hyperwave Signal Interceptor
  • Long-range Sensors
  • Crew Quarters
  • Anti-ion Emission Tracer
  • De-Ionizer
  • Hanger Bays
  • Internal War Bridge
  • Droid Workshop
  • Cast Duranium Frame
  • Molecular Shielding
  • Front Facing Bridge
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Strengths:
  • Unlimited Power - This ship designed to punch a hole in anything that it fires upon, it's extremely powerful weaponwise and very armed. (subject to other writer)
  • Amazingly Defended - A ship was the speed of a brick and turning circle of a tank, the Vindictive also boasts the defense of a tank covered in bricks.
  • Internal Bridge - A good place to hide and protect the important crew members, the internal war bridge is defended and hidden in the middle of the ship.
Weaknesses:
  • Blind - Every arrow shaped cruiser has this issue, there are no weapons covering the area behind this ship, opening up a very obvious target for a few explosives.
  • Obvious - The front facing bridge is a pretty obvious target. A well placed shot will decomission this ship for a while.
  • Brick - A ship with all the speed and grace of a brick, this ship has no turning circle and very little speed.
Description: Built and designed by the Fel Empire to provide a flagship fit for duty, The Vindictive is a tank of a ship. With an even spread of weapons across the entire ship, excluding the back, this ship can tear through anything on either side or in front of it.

With a crew of fifty thousand, this destroyer has the storage space to hold enough food to survive two years of constant exploring and travel, should it not be able to dock with a space station to resupply. Every crew member has a "reasonable" cabin, however some lower ranking officers do have to share in bunk beds to conserve space for more weapons and wires and cables and death weapons.

The Vindictive was designed to serve as the flagship for the Fel Empire, and serve as a flagship is exactly what it does.
 
Directorate Officer
Writer
Kyle O'Conner said:
Saotome Computer Suite
Can you show permission to use this component please given that sub's affiliation?



Kyle O'Conner said:
Unlimited Power - This ship is going to punch a hole in anything that it fires upon, it's extremely powerful weaponwise and very armed.

This needs to be toned down somewhat, as we cannot dictate damage to other writers OOC. An easy way to fix this may be something like "This ship is designed to punch a hole in heavily protected warships because of its extremely powerful weapons" or something like that.
 

Kei Raxis

The Dead One
Writer
Removed! I had the computer suite on another ship and never got pulled up on it, mostly because it's an open market sub but I have better things to do than try and argue it so all is good.

Reworded slightly. I kept the main bulk and just added a diclaimer on the end :)

[member="Gir Quee"]
 
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