The Vanguard

[GrimmReconz]

Image Source: HERE
Affiliation: Personal
Manufacturer: Silk Holdings
Model: Peregrine-class Armed Freighter
Modularity: Yes
Production: Unique
Material: Duratseel Hull, Solarium Glasteel Viewports,and Matrix Armor Plating.
Classification: Assault Frigate,Armed Transport

Length: 400m
Width: 250m
Height: 200m

Armament:
-8 Quad Turbolaser Cannons on Fast Mounts
-4 Dual Turbolasers
-2 Ion Cannons on Fast Mounts
-12 AG-2G Quad Laser Cannonshttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/AG-2G_quad_laser_cannon
-12 Vulcan Mass Driver Flak Cannons
- 12 Antimissile Octets
- 12 Heavy Rockets
- 24 Point Defense Guns

Hangar: 24 Kandosii-class Bombers and MkII Cabur-class Starfighters
4 Malos-Class Gunships
6 Winter Eagle-class
Special Features:

• Communications Array
• Encryption Network
• False Telesponder Identities (4)
• Force Cylinder (Omnicompatible Docking)
• Escape Pods
• Standard Deflector Shield Generator
• Standard Detention Cells
• Standard Life Support Systems
• Standard Navigational Systems
• Standard Sensor Array
• Standard Targeting Systems
• Trapped False Docking Ports (4)
• Tractor Beams (3: 1 dorsal stern, 1 ventral stern, 1 ventral bow)
• QQ-4U85 Tractor Shroud (4: 2 dorsal stern, 2 ventral stern)

Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 8 (On the orignial ship its 4 but I figured since I have heavily modified it this would be more realistic)
Strengths:

• Heavy Weapons
• Heavy Armor

Weaknesses:

• Little Cargo Capacity

Description:The Vanguard is Growl's heavily modified Peregrine-class Armed Freighter.The purpose of this ship is to be able to get in,kill your enemy,and get out.For this reason the cargo capacity is terrible with the Hangar full loaded like it is.While the ship can handle its own it is not meant to go toe to toe with a Star Destroyer (for obvious reasons) nor is it meant to be severely outnumbered.The Vanguard can be used in a multitude of situations such as base assaults,space combat,escorting,and so on.The crew of The Vanguard use Code Cylinders to determine who belongs where,for instance the crews operating the guns would have access to the guns while the cooks would not and vice versa.When most people look at The Vanguard they make the mistake of underestimating it which is the last mistake they will make on most occasions thanks to the weapons lining the ship as well as the sheer power of the fighters/bombers within the hangar that can wreak havoc on cruiser sized ships.Overall The Vanguard is a reliable ship that can get the job done.

Power Core Generator/Reactor: Solar Ionization Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: 2
Minimum Crew: 110
Optimal Crew: 420
Passenger Capacity: 300
Cargo Capacity: 150,000 tons if fighter hangar space is empty; 6,000 tons if fighter hangar space is full
Consumables: 6 months
Development Thread: N/A (Unless Needed)
Intent: To provide Growl with a starship that can get him from point A to point B without having to worry about pirates,rival factions,etc.This ship will also be used to transport his soldiers if one of Justice Shipping Ltd's bases were under attack.
Who Can Use This: Only Growl can use this ship.
Primary Source: HERE

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

[member="Growl"] Hello, in looking this over the first thing that jumps out is this was made with the old star ship creation rules and template. This need to get it layed out to fit the new template and star ship creation system. Here is the link to the template. Link

So look at the Template and move all the data into it in the way it is lined out. Also Fix all the copy pasting. We do not allow that in factory subs.

some things need changed but not alot.

-8 Quad Turbolaser Cannons on Fast Mounts

you can not mount more than one weapon of this size on a fast mount. Generally only Light turbolasers are mounted on fast trak mounts. Mounting Ion cannons and turbolasers on fast mounts really doesn't give you any advantage because they can not target anything smaller than a corvette anyway.

-12 AG-2G Quad Laser Cannons -12 Vulcan Mass Driver Flak Cannons - 12 Antimissile Octets - 12 Heavy Rockets - 24 Point Defense Guns

Are these just the rockets or are these launch tubes? If these are just the rockets then That is fine but a 400 meter personnel ship can not have 12 heavy warhead launchers on it without some development.

As a 400 meter personnel ship this falls under frigates are are only allowed so many weapons of each type. Capital, Warhead, and Defensive. While your capital weapons are fine and right on par with a unique frigate the warheads i stated above would need development to put that many of them on it. Generally heavy warhead laucnhers are not even allowed on frigates, only light ones.

12 Vulcan Mass Driver Flak Cannons - These are massive weapon systems. each counts as 30 defense guns which a frigate normally will not even have 30 total. a frigate is generally allowed around 20 defensive guns max. It can be pushed a bit if there are weaknesses in the design which allow for it such as s it being slow, or no warheads or light capital weapons. Also it being a unique ship gives you some room for a few more. But these are just too large and meant for destroyers. All of your other defensive weapons count as .5 guns giving you a total of 48 defense guns without these, which is still almost twice that of a normal frigate. But 48 is ok as this is unique ship. So pull the vulcan mass driver cannons off and the weapons will be fine. If you want to keep one then you will have to lose some of the other weapons.

Hangar: 24 Kandosii-class Bombers and MkII Cabur-class Starfighters 4 Malos-Class Gunships 6 Winter Eagle-class

We list hanger capacity now in Squadron count so Change this to just 2 Squadrons. you do not need to specify what the makeup of fighter type these are.

Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 8 (On the orignial ship its 4 but I figured since I have heavily modified it this would be more realistic)

The original submission was created based on a system that was 1-10. The system we use now is based on 1-20 so doubleing it to 8 from the original 4 was the correct thing to do.

 

[GrimmReconz]

Would it be ok if I wiped this entire ship and started fresh?I have some different ideas and it'd be easier.

[member="Reshmar"]

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

[member="Growl"] Sure that's fine if that's what you want. I could help you work this out if you like also. we can get this working just takes a few things

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Growl"] Status of submission? Remember WIP are not allowed, if you're wiping the ship I can archive this.

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

[member="Spencer Jacobs"] Archive this. He is going to start fresh.