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Approved Tech The United's Epidermis

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  • Intent: To sub a Unique Light Armor
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: The United ( Arianna Belasko Arianna Belasko )
  • Affiliation: Arianna Belasko
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Armorweave
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose
  • Weight: Light
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Low
    • Kinetic: Low
    • Lightsabers: Average
    • Light Side: Extreme
    • Dark Side: Extreme
    • Nuetral: None
    • Acid: High
    • Vibro: High
    • Flame: Very Low
    • Cryo: Very Low
    • Lightning: Average
    • Paddle Beams: None
    • Nullification Resin: None
    • Magic: Very High (Conditional)
SPECIAL FEATURES

Extreme Resistance to Light and Dark Force Powers

Heals user and repairs extremely quickly due to magical enchantments

Can be used by both personas of Arianna

Enhances Strength, Speed, and Reflexes by four times their limit

Allows "Arianna" to temporarily channel the slivers of the United's Persona still in the suit, granting enhanced strength on all magical attacks

STRENGTHS

Master Resistance: Wearing this Armor makes Arianna massively resistant to the effects of both the light and dark sides of the Force, along with Magic

Healing: The wearer will recover in the span of 14 minutes from even the most severe injury, just like the suit.

Enhancer: Enhances the wearer's strength, speed, and reflexes by a factor of 4

Doubler: Can be used by both Personas in Arianna

Channeler: If desperate, Arianna can channel the traces of the original Owner's Mind, recreating a false version of The United, with enhanced strength in magical attacks as well as very high Resistance to magic...but only when using this Persona.

Vibro Resistance: Able to take many direct blows from a vibroweapon

Acid Resistance: Acid takes a while to eat through this


WEAKNESSES

Force Voids: Wearing this immediately cancels all magical effects of the armor, and either Persona will be heavily nauseated and sluggish while wearing it in one.

Flame: Can take only a small Blast before it starts to break down

Cryo: Can only take a small blast from Cryo weapons before it starts to break down

Blasters: Can only take a small number of hits from blasters before being pierced

Slugs: Can take only a small number of slugthrower rounds

Lightsabers: Can take only a small amount of direct blows before failing

Nullification Resin: Instantly breaks through its defenses

Paddle Beams don't paralyze her, but instead cause Extreme agony if hit, due to the energy reacting with the magic of the suit. It stops the typical effects, but at the cost of extreme pain--which can be deadly at a crucial moment in a fight.

Nuetral: Nuetral Force Powers stun her slightly longer while wearing this

Lightning: Breaks down the armor after an extended blast of it

Clingy: Wearing this, in spite of having been purified, still carries slivers of the United's Persona. If "Arianna" wears this too long while Channeling the remains of the Former Owner's Persona in a Dark Nexus, the greater the risk that the legion of evil minds that once inhabited the original owner of the suit, long ago banished to eternal Torture in Chaos, would seek to actively possess her and recreate The United for real, making the suit somewhat alive. Therefore, this makes putting on the suit an extreme risk to begin with, and actually channeling The United's Persona should only be done as an act of desperation. Also, once switching to that Persona, it is hard to escape it.

DESCRIPTION

The United was once Matriarch of the Cult of the Brain Demon. Using the body of wealthy, depraved Heiress Arianna Belasko as the home of all its evil minds, The Matriarch attempted to further increase her power to near god like levels by initiating a horrific ritualized slaughter on a Jedi Temple hidden on Mimban. Becoming a living Nexus of almost pure evil by trapping the souls of the Jedi and Witches into reliving the last moments of their death at eachothers hands for eternity, The United was a cmvictim of her own success, as evolving in such a manner destroyed her physical body, trapping her there. Attempting many years later to turn a then Padawan Laertia Io to the Darkness by offering to openly act as her Mother in a way her master Ursula wouldn't, all the United required was that Laertia sacrifice Ursula for possession. Given the revelation that Ursula was The Amalgam all along, one can understand why she considered possesing "Ursula's body such a sticking point, and one can only imagine what would have happened had Laertia actually given in.

The new Owner, however, is no more entirely free of the Danger of The United truly returning then Laertia was. Great care must be taken when using this armor...the risk of losing control is too severe...
 
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Arianna Belasko Arianna Belasko

So few problems. The ratings you listed don't match up with the weaknesses - and hard numbers are not a great idea in how many hits it can take. As an example, the cryo and flame weaknesses say 'very low' but can still take nearly 15 seconds of sustained blast. Thats a very long time to not break down.

Most of those weaknesses either need to have the number removed, or to have them lowered to match the ratings - especially considering this can apparently heal fully in a matter of 14 seconds. Just overall needs some rebalancing.
 
Arianna Belasko Arianna Belasko

Again, this is really pushing the envelop on what could be considered 'balanced'. The hard numbers are not representative of the rating as I see them, nor is it likely to be for a lot of others. For Cryo and Flame, I'd remove them entirely.

As for paddle beams, having 'none' as a rating for them doesn't make sense if it still stops the point of them.
 
Arianna Belasko Arianna Belasko

I don't think we're going to get much better than this, so I'll leave you with this - This is a strong submission, arguably broken. However, it doesn't call hits or otherwise destroy cities or mass population so I can't rightly tell you to tone anything else down about it. That being said, abuse it and lose.

Be aware that powerful submissions are still subject to reports.

Approved.
 
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