The Underwood (Personal Transport)

[Viera Valorious]

Image Source: http://adamkop.devia...ssion-328945182
Affiliation: Personal
Manufacturer: Nubian contractor
Model: N/A
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Titanium, other basic ship building materials
Classification: Personal Transport, Envoy
Length: 109 meters
Width: 60 meters
Height: 25 meters

Armament Rating: 2
Hangar: 0
Special Features:
-basic shields and armor
-basic scanners
-conference room
-basic autopilot and autolanding features
-voice command bridge
-VTOL capability
-three retracting point defense guns mounted on the underside
-kitchen and dining hall
-communications array with Holonet access
-multiple bedrooms, offices, and bathrooms
-aisled passenger seating
-small medical bay

Maneuverability Rating: 7
Speed Rating: 7
Hyperdrive Class: 1

Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
-Speed
-Maneuverability
-Automation
Weaknesses: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
-Weaponry
-Survivability

Description: The Underwood was custom built for Viera's father as a personal transport vessel to be used on recreational and business trips. In need of a comfortable and fast starship, he spared no expense on luxury.

Minimum Crew: One (Pilot)
Suggested Crew: Fifteen (Pilot, Co-Pilot, Nurse, Flight Mechanic, Communications Expert, 5 kitchen staff, 5 security staff)

Recommended Maximum Passengers: 20-30 regular, 10 extended travel
Cargo Area: Medium
Consumables: Enough to last 10 people one month.

It is currently in the possession of Viera Valorious, however, rightful ownership is uncertain as the ship was never fully paid off and Viera's father has been exposed for fradulent activities.

Who Can Use This: Viera Valorious

Development Threads: N/A

Intent: To create a personal transport for use by my character, Viera Valorious

Primary Source: N/A

 

[Gir Quee]

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Gir Quee]

Armament: 2

I'm guessing that this is an armament rating?

And just to be on the safe side, are you using the Armament rating system found on wookieepedia, or the one listed in the starship template?

Maneuverability Rating: 5 Speed Rating: 5

Please increase speed and maneuverability ratings to "7" .

-basic shields and armor
-basic scanners
-conference room
-basic autopilot and autolanding features
-voice command bridge
-VTOL capability
-three retracting point defense guns mounted on the underside
-kitchen and dining hall
-communications array with Holonet access
-multiple bedrooms, offices, and bathrooms
-aisled passenger seating
-small medical bay

Please place this section under "Special Features"


It looks like part of the template is missing after the description:

Development Thread: (Restricted Items require specific development threads. The more posts, the more powerful the submission can be. Links: Banned & Restricted Items)
Intent: (Please describe your reason for submitting this. It may be simple or complicated. The Factory Judge will take this into consideration.)
Who Can Use This: (Optional. If you chose Limited, Semi-Unique, or Unique in Productivity above please list what groups/characters can use this submission in role-plays.)
Primary Source: (Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)

I don't think that this submission needs a development thread or a primary source, so you can just put "N/A" for those items. As far as the intent, well, I leave that part up to you.

 

[Viera Valorous]

Image Source: http://adamkop.devia...ssion-328945182
Affiliation: Personal
Manufacturer: Nubian contractor
Model: N/A
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Titanium, other basic ship building materials
Classification: Personal Transport, Envoy
Length: 109 meters
Width: 60 meters
Height: 25 meters

Armament Rating: 2
Hangar: 0
Special Features:
-basic shields and armor
-basic scanners
-conference room
-basic autopilot and autolanding features
-voice command bridge
-VTOL capability
-three retracting point defense guns mounted on the underside
-kitchen and dining hall
-communications array with Holonet access
-multiple bedrooms, offices, and bathrooms
-aisled passenger seating
-small medical bay

Maneuverability Rating: 7
Speed Rating: 7
Hyperdrive Class: 1

Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
-Speed
-Maneuverability
-Automation
Weaknesses: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
-Weaponry
-Survivability

Description: The Underwood was custom built for Viera's father as a personal transport vessel to be used on recreational and business trips. In need of a comfortable and fast starship, he spared no expense on luxury.

Minimum Crew: One (Pilot)
Suggested Crew: Fifteen (Pilot, Co-Pilot, Nurse, Flight Mechanic, Communications Expert, 5 kitchen staff, 5 security staff)

Recommended Maximum Passengers: 20-30 regular, 10 extended travel
Cargo Area: Medium
Consumables: Enough to last 10 people one month.

It is currently in the possession of Viera Valorious, however, rightful ownership is uncertain as the ship was never fully paid off and Viera's father has been exposed for fradulent activities.

Who Can Use This: Viera Valorious

Development Threads: N/A

Intent: To create a personal transport for use by my character, Viera Valorious

Primary Source: N/A

 

[Viera Valorous]

Hey, so I couldn't figure out how to make edits from mobile, I currently no longer have a laptop at my disposal so I just posted it over with te changes you suggested made.

If you see anything else let me know, otherwise I'll try to edit if I can get to a computer later.

 

[Viera Valorous]

[member="Gir Quee"]

Made edits to the OP as asked!

 

[Gir Quee]

Approved Pending Secondary approval

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.