Approved Starship The Thunderflash

[Lenix Ornil]

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Affiliation: Open Market (Military Oriented)
Manufacturer: Galofree Yards Inc.
Model: GR-75 Transporter (Custom Variant)
Modularity: No
Production: Variant
Material: Durasteel
Classification: Transporter

Length: 90 Meters

Width: 22 Meters

Height: 16 Meters
Armament: 10/20

Hangar: 2 Starfighters

Special Features: Cargo Space taken out and replaced with a large internal hangar, for salvage equipment and large salvaged parts, diagnostics and most repairs crewed by salvaged droids (though actions are slower than with a sentient crew) Upgraded sub light engines and a class 0.9 Hyperdrive (both highly unreliable and subject to maintenance), 2 medium strength Tractor beams for collecting salvage (The owner being a Squib, the tractor beams are finely made and precise)

Maneuverability Rating: 12/20

Strengths: ​

• Faster than most stock ships in its class
• Large cargo space, and custom hangar allows for hefty load space
• Modestly armed for it's class

Weaknesses:

• Cumbersome at maneuvering
• Automated crew can make certain actions sluggish compared to human control
• Hyperdrive and custom sublight engines high maintenance

Description: [SIZE=11.9999990463257px]The ship was Lenix's second after the CR90 Corvette [/SIZE]The Interceptor [SIZE=11.9999990463257px]and was purchased for it's superior cargo and salvage capabilities. The Squib had to put a lot of work into making her systems up to scratch but once the custom sub-light drives and Class 0.9 hyperdrive were fitted, the once sluggish freighter now could break the sound barrier! Leading to her name the [/SIZE]Thunderflash[SIZE=11.9999990463257px]. Fitted with a custom hangar to accommodate speeders and his salvaging equipment, the ship is the first step into the big leagues![/SIZE]
Development Thread:N/A
Intent: A better ship for salvage use than his old ship, and something less expensive to repair
Who Can Use This: Specific variant- Lenix Ornil
Primary Source: N/A

 

[Camellia Swift]

[member="Lenix Ornil"]

Nothing seems terribly wrong with this, but I do have two requests for you.

First off is this a mass produced ship or one just for you? The way you wrote everything makes it hard to distinguish the mass produced model from the one you have for yourself, I would split that information up.

Also you're missing Width and Height. Going off the Gallofree's numbers, you could probably put 16 meter for Height, and 22 for Width.

 

[Lenix Ornil]

Changed

[member="Camellia Swift"]

 

[Camellia Swift]

[member="Lenix Ornil"]

Alright looks ok to me, pending secondary.

 

[Soliath Devin Talith]

Approved.