The Mi'Shin

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Name: Mi'Shin
Designation: Sentient
Homeworld: Spread through the galaxy
Language: Basic,Rodian,Huttese. Average height of adults: 6
Skin color: Blue Hair color: None
Breathes: Oxygen
Strengths: Attuned to the Force,Very peaceful,Strong minded
Weaknesses: Weak bodies,not violent Distinctions: They are mentally and physically attuned to the force,so they can float.This floating,however,requires around 20-40 years of training,and makes it harder to use the force
Average Lifespan: 80 Races: Dark Side Monks,Light Side Monks,Neutral Monks
Estimated Population: Nearing extinction,spread through the galaxy
Diet: Fruits and vegetables
Communication: Telepathec [Antennas]
Culture: Peaceful,they are very nomadic and often enjoy spreading knowledge
Technology level: At tech level of Lightsabers [Do not use blasters]
General behavior: Often peaceful towards others,no matter what they study.
History: A species fascinated with the force,they first originated on Taris,where they would spend many years studying Midichlorians,and the force.After many years,they were run out of their home by local civilians for 'stealing people'.After this,they were hunted to near extinction due to a rumor of their 'stealing'.
Notable Player-Characters: [None yet]
Intent: Bestow knowledge upon others,help protect the innocent.Align the people of the force together,as one mighty force.

 

[KeCholo]

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[KeCholo]

Language: Basic,Geonosian,Rodian,Huttese.

Geonosian is extremely difficult for anyone other than a Geonosian to learn, the best someone else could do would be crude Geonosian. Your species could be fluent in it, but I'd ask you to remove the other three languages and specify that they have some special auditory thing.

Distinctions: They are mentally and physically attuned to the force,so they can float

Floating would mean that they constantly are devoting a large portion of their force powers to doing said floating. Perhaps you could say that they train to have the ability to float for /x/ amount of time or prefer telekinesis as a force power.

Races: Dark Side Monks,Light Side Monks,Neutral Monks

Under each one of these give a summary of what powers these monks prefer, why they chose to join a certain side, how this division affects the community ect ect.

Estimated Population: Nearing extinction,spread through the galaxy

Give me a reasonable number here, and if they are spread throughout the galaxy then change the homeworld to spread throughout the galaxy but concentrated on Taris

Diet: Fruits and vegetables

Change to 'Herbivore'

Culture: Peaceful,they are very nomadic and often enjoy spreading knowledge

Bulk this up to a paragraph

Technology level: At tech level of Lightsabers [Do not use blasters]

Paragraph please

General behavior: Often peaceful towards others,no matter what they study.

Paragraph plz

History: A species fascinated with the force,they first originated on Taris,where they would spend many years studying Midichlorians,and the force.After many years,they were run out of their home by local civilians for 'stealing people'.After this,they were hunted to near extinction due to a rumor of their 'stealing'

Add a few sentences here

Intent: Bestow knowledge upon others,help protect the innocent.Align the people of the force together,as one mighty force.

This is your intent, why are you making these guys.

 

[KeCholo]

Please make the necessary edits in 24 hours or this submission will be denied. [member="Dancanned"]

 

[KeCholo]

Denied, [member="Valiens Nantaris"] archive this please

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Archived