Approved Tech The "Maggot" 789 round.

[Basark Blu]

Intent: To create a unique slugthrower round, used only by Basark.

Development thread: None.

Manufacturer: Basark Blu.

Model: 789.

Modularity: None.

Company: Only manufactured by Basark.

Affiliation: This type of ammunition is used by Basark Blu, on hunts.

Production: Unique.

Material: Durosteel, several blaster components, and a bit of Ion metal.

Description: This ammunition is rather large in size and is quite deadly. When the round is fired, as soon as the round comes in contact with any object, the blaster components ignite, usually igniting the object as well. It is built specifically for slugthrowers. If the round punctures skin, the pain is quite unbearable for the victim. The bullet is always lethal and can fly up to 30 yards, depending on the type of weapon used. The round ignites when the weapon is shot, due to advanced modifications from Basark.

(Question: Is this all I need for just ammo? I mean, it does not really fit any of the categories at the bottom of the templates)

 

[Writer]

[member="Basark Blu"]

Under Review.

 

[Writer]

Approved.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Basark Blu"]
I have a couple of questions about this.

You state that the round is quite big, then mention it's only 1 inch. That's not really that large, unless you mean the bullet itself is that large without the case...in which case that's massive. Please qualify what you mean here.
I'm not quite sure how this ignites the target, or what you mean by blaster wires.
Remove the 'always' from 'usually always lethal'. We prefer comments like that to be avoided.

Please @mention me when you're ready.

 

[Basark Blu]

Done, thank you for notifying me of the mistakes.

[member="Valeria Aetani"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Basark Blu"]
I still don't understand some things, but it's not important. Abuse at your peril.

Approved.