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Approved Location The Hold

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Military Base Name: [ The Hold ]
  • Classification: [ Stronghold/Capital/HQ ]
  • Location: [ Hollastin ]
  • Affiliation: [ The Bulwark Coalition, Led by Simeon Karth ]
  • Population: [ Heavy. Around 45,000 - 50,000 armed troops are around the base, with them split into 20,000 in the interior and 25,000 on the perimeter in constant rotation. No strong navy, encased in a waterfall makes an aerial assault not only difficult but unlikely. ]
  • Demographics: [ The Hold is inhabited by all species of a soldier, yet more than 30,000 of their troops are Human. ]
  • Accessibility: [ The Hold is only open to those who request an audience with Simeon or one of the Lieutenants. It is not difficult to discover, but hard to crack into. ]
  • Description: [ The Hold is nearly 700 feet high, only made more impressive by the waterfall that rushes around it in every direction. It is built upon a perched rock, where a significant portion of the stronghold is located inside. The journey to The Hold itself is said to be made treacherous by the constant crashing of water onto the frail and thin bridge. ]
POINTS OF INTEREST

The War Room
The War Room, the main meeting place of The Bulwark Coalitions leaders and driving forces. This is the room where the decisions get made, and the future of the faction is at stake. Held on the lowest floor of The Hold, the war room is where The Bulwark Coalition keeps its battle strategy and communication systems. This room is the most well-defended, with handpicked and trained guards to stand at all times of every hour.

The Inner Sanctum
The Inner Sanctum, where The Bulwark Coalition holds information that they do not share anywhere else. Stockpiled here, only the Lieutenants and Simeon have access to it. Secrets are held in here, along with old relics and ancient information forgotten by many.

The Bridge
The Bridge leading to The Hold is perilous and riddled with strange glyphs and markings. Even Simeon finds himself wondering how a group of people, without the proper technology, could make such a monument to architecture. No matter how much weight, or how strong the waves, the bridge to The Hold has yet to falter. A common practice for fallen comrades to The Bulwark Coalition is to have a proper funeral on the bridge, before throwing their bodies into the water, where they rest where their story began.


Hightower
Nobody is entirely sure what is in the Hightower, the only people who hold that information are Simeon and the Lieutenants. The rumors that circle around The Hold, however, do note that when they bring someone up to the Hightower, they are never seen again.

SECURITY
High

  1. 500x DF.9 canons surrounding the base.
  2. 100x v-150 Planet defenders on the trim of the base.
  3. 20,000 Ground Troops inside The Hold
  4. 25,000 - 30,000 Ground troops surrounding The Hold, as well as on top of the waterfall surrounding the hold.
HISTORY
The Hold, a regal gathering place of The Bulwark Coalitions leaders, allies, and collective forces, has been a focal point of Hollastin for as long as most can remember. The original building of The Hold took place years and years before anyone alive now could remember, and most historical texts of its exact creation have been lost with the passage of time. Interesting legend surrounds its origins, but none have any grounds to be proven correct. The Karths', beginning a long time ago, still stand defiantly as the leaders of the base. Having studied the exact infrastructure of The Hold, however, can prove most useful when trying to gather an understanding of it, but for the most part, raising more questions than it answers.

No intellectual in the galaxy can read the ancient glyphs etched into the sandstone of the bridge, the language is long forgotten to the washing waves of the galaxy. Everyone has tried, and every one has failed.
 
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Zak Dymo

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Simeon Karth Simeon Karth

I'll be conducting this review for you. While I appreciate the effort that you've put into making this submission visually appealing, I need to start by noting the Codex Rules, which state in relevant part: Spoilers and Tabs are not permitted in submissions.

As such, you will need to remove the tabs before this submission can be approved.

As a second note, you are missing the HISTORY section of the template, which should come after the Security section. That will need to be included and filled out.

Please let me know if you have any questions. Otherwise, tag me when you have completed any edits.
 
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