Approved Starship The Free and Unrestrained

[John Trenway]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: A vehicle in which to commit piracy
• Image Source: https://www.pinterest.com/bennettgtr13/star-wars/
• Canon Link: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/CR90_corvette
• Restricted Missions:
• Primary Source:

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Corellian Manufacturing Corporation
• Model: CR90 corvette
• Affiliation: John Trenway
• Production: Unique
• Material: Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Corvette
• Length: 126.68 m
• Width: 58.95 m
• Height: 16.97 m
• Armament: x2 dual turbolaser turrets, x4 single turbolasers, Average
• Defenses: Standard durasteel hull, standard shielding system, Average
• Hangar: 0, Average
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive Class: 2

SPECIAL FEATURES:
Boarding Pods
Modified Tractor Beam
Strengths:
Extremely maneuverable, capable of lightening fast hit-and-run attacks
Weaknesses:
Not a lot of firepower. Cannot hold in a sustained fight against a better-armed opponent.

Description:

The Free and Unrestrained has several modifications which make her more befitting for her role as a pirate ship. The corvette carries a modified tractor beam, capable of holding in place a ship double her size and slowing down all but the biggest ships. Several boarding pods are also in place, launched from both the starboard and port sides, that can send small boarding parties to a captive ship if the actual boarding ramp is unavailable. The pods are then retracted by a length of durasteel lined cables that are attached from the back of the pod to the pod ports on The Free and Unrestrained.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="John Trenway"]

As far as balance goes, at the moment this ship is running somewhat out of bounds, even for Unique. I'd like to see either a substantial weakness added, or bumping either Speed or Maneuverability up to 'High.'

You mentioned under Intent this is to make a pirate ship, but there's nothing here that screams pirate to me. This is by no means required, but I encourage you to get creative in the description with modifications or additions that make this a proper pirate ship. Boarding pods, extra tractor beams, maybe even capital-ship scale harpoon cables or something. Those are just a few ideas, feel free to make something up. Again, this isn't required at all, just me thinking out loud.

 

[John Trenway]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]

Changes made as requested. Funny enough, I was actually intending to add such special features, but when I was writing the submission, time was short. Thanks for reminding me.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="John Trenway"]

Looking good, just some detail work with the template needed.

Please add the following bit at the bottom..

Description: (Describing your submission's history is optional. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. There is no requirement for amount of words here so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your special features.)

You've basically done this already under 'Special Features.' If you turn that into a list like so,

• Modified Tractor Beam
• Boarding Pods

And then add in what what you have written under description you should be good to go.

 

[John Trenway]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]

Changed as requested.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Raziel]

Approved.