Approved Location The Fallen Citadel

[Darth Aegis]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To provide a main base for Darth Aegis and his troops.
• ​Image Credit: Source1| Source2
• Canon: N/A
• Links: Darth Aegis

SETTING INFORMATION

• Military Base Name: The Fallen Citadel
• Classification: Miscellaneous
• Location: Endor
• Affiliation: Darth Aegis
• Population: The Military Base fields several thousand troops, with four small pilot squadrons.
• Accessibility: The base has a bridge connecting to its main gate, it is the only way to access the base other than from air. It is heavily guarded from all angles with many inner and outside walls. Undead troops and other forces are stationed and training all over this base. No personnel are allowed in other than under Aegis' command.
• Description: The base is very large, and has many walls. There are the outer walls which make up the foundation from what is seen from the outside. Inside, there are about 4 inner walls. Each getting smaller within each layer. The material it is made out of is a compound of some of the strongest metals found on Endor, with none being imported. Typically the most troops here are doing is training or slave labor.

POINTS OF INTEREST

Outer Gate [Source]

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The outer gate is at the end of the bridge, and is the entrance into the base. It typically has several units guarding it.

The Fight Pits [Source]

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The Fight Pits is just an extremely large arena used for training. Often troops will fight each other to move up the hierarchy, prove their dominance, or just to improve.

The Library [Source]

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The library holds all relics, holocrons, and books that Darth Aegis has found in his travels. The most special relics/books/holocrons go in The Santuary, but any others go here. It's very vast and contains large amounts of information, knowledge, and even power.

The Sanctuary [Source]

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The Sanctuary holds Darth Aegis' throne room and meditation chambers. The Sanctuary is located within the large tower. Here, he may watch over his base in pride.

SECURITY
High

2 v-150 Planet Defenders
Many Ion Turrets placed on roofs, and the main gate.
The base is also covered with troops, and most areas being guarded by assigned units.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The base/castle was originally in control of a previous Sith Knight who had been on a campaign in Endor for some reason. He had the base built by his slaves for himself, to honor his campaign. He held the base for many years until eventually Darth Aegis while on Endor to capture Ewoks for a Sithspawn creation, found it. He at this time wasn't strong enough to take it by himself, so he rallied up locals and used his basic necromancy levels to build a militia. With this militia, he stormed the gates of the base, slaughtering the Sith Knight.

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

Under review

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

Very spoopy!

First, I need you to include image credits for the four pictures you use in the Points of Interest section.

Classification: Generic

Generic is not an appropriate classification, please fix.

"The Fallen Nine"

What is "The Fallen Nine"? There is no reference to them anywhere else in the sub. Do you have an NPC sub for them?

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

Status on this?

 

[Darth Aegis]

[member="Irajah Ven"]

Sorry, went on vacation and wasn't able to get to this. I'll clear up your requested edits.

 

[Darth Aegis]

Removed reference to the un-subbed NPC, and added links to the original sources of all images.

[member="Irajah Ven"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

First, I'd like to apologize- generic was an acceptable classification, but due to the fact that I was still learning the ropes I did not realize it at the time (that is it specifically listed in the template). Thank you for changing it without argument, but that was my mistake, not yours. If you think that is a better description for this sub you are more than welcome to put it back (but are under no obligation to change it again.

Affiliation: Darth Aegis owns and rules this location.

Please link to your character bio here.

Population: The Military Base is extremely large, and has an army population of several hundred thousand. The navy population is around 40,000 as it is less used there.

These are the kinds of numbers a faction might field from a single, extremely powerful, military base. With an affiliation of a single player these number are too high (for instance, you can't even field ships large enough to warrant that number of navy). You don't have to give specific numbers, but drop these significantly, something in the thousands rather than hundreds of thousands is much more reasonable for a single character affiliation.

DEFENSES
The base carried 4 v-150 Planet Defenders, as well as the heavy amount of troops stationed. There are also many ion turrets stationed on the tops of walls.

With the recent update to Codex 2.1, this section of the template has changes *slightly* for clarity reasons:

SECURITY
You must provide your security assets in list format and must provide your base a Security Rating (choose from: None, Low, Medium, High, Maximum). What defenses does this Military Base have? Please link relevant tech/equipment to the SW wiki article or Factory-approved submission.]

So to start, you can add the security rating (High would likely be appropriate based on the combination of ion weapons and troops).

In ESB, the Hoth rebels kept an Imperial fleet at bay with *one* of those planet defenders- four is excessive. Drop it to one or two (if you want redundancy in case the first gets taken out) and link to the wookiee article please.

 

[Darth Aegis]

Done!

Edited the template to add security and remove defenses, as well as dropped the planet defender count to two.

[member="Irajah Ven"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

Magnificent, thank you.

SECURITY
High

2 v-150 Planet Defenders
The base is also covered with troops, and most areas being guarded by assigned units.

This isn't a problem- but I see you removed that you had regular ion cannons scattered over the roof- you didn't have to and if you'd like to include them for AA use you absolutely can! Those big ole' planet defenders are great for stuff in orbit, but you absolutely don't need to remove the smaller ones for closer, more immediate threats. That's up to you, but you can absolutely add those back in, they were not a problem.

I won't stamp this pending till I know one way or the other (since that'll lock it and you won't be able to make that edit if you want to), but once you have if you like, this looks good on my end

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

Status on this?

 

[Darth Aegis]

Added the cannons back in.

[member="Irajah Ven"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Darth Aegis"]

Alright, looks good!

Pending secondary.

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Approved.