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The Dragon's Thorn

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Affiliation: Crew of the Dragon's Thorn
Manufacturer: Crew of the Dragon's Thorn
Model: N/A
Modularity: (Can you add components to this submission? If so, link to all Approved Factory Submissions applicable. For most submissions, put 'No'.)
Production: (The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (Only A Handful of Characters), Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs), Minor (Any Character, Only Select Groups Of NPCs), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))
Material: Durasteel, Alusteel, Bronzium.
Classification: Corvette

Length: 200 meters.

Width: 75 meters.

Height: 75 meters.

Armament:
  • 12 Capital Guns
  • 6 Warhead Launchers
  • 4 Defense Guns

Hangar: Squadron Count-1

Special Features: (Provide all of your submission's special features, including non-combat items and special weapons, here in a list. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Shields, Engines)

Maneuverability Rating: 13
Speed Rating: 8
Hyperdrive Class: 2

Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)

Description: (Describing your submission's history is optional. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. There is no requirement for amount of words here so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your special features.)
Development Thread: (Restricted Items require specific development threads. The more posts, the more powerful the submission can be. Links: Banned & Restricted Items)
Intent: (Please describe your reason for submitting this. It may be simple or complicated. The Factory Judge will take this into consideration.)
Who Can Use This: (Optional. If you chose Limited, Semi-Unique, or Unique in Productivity above please list what groups/characters can use this submission in role-plays.)
 
Modularity: Each area of the ship has scavenged parts some where, as such it is possible for these pieces to be replaced as needed.
Production: Unique
Classification: Corvette / Transport
Manoeuvrability Rating: 15
Speed Rating: 8
Hyperdrive Class: 1.9
Intent: To create a ship for the use of the Dragon's Thorn Crew. The ship is to serve as living areas while a base of operations is being procured.
Who Can Use This: Despite being Unique, the Dragon's Thorn is open to many people. Anyone who serves under the Dragon's Thorn Flag is allowed safe access to the ship.


[member="Kath"], Suggestions for what you could put.
 
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Maybe just put Dragon's Thorn Crew for use. Less words and will be easier read. Other than that I have no problem with this... Unless we want the ship faster or more manuverable.

[member="Ydrin"] [member="Kath"]
 
Strengths:
- High-performance rebuilt engines (both sublight and hyperdrive)
- Well-armored (?)
- Large amount of backup systems
- Well-armed (?)
- Maneuverable (?)
- Fast (?)
Weaknesses:
- Slow sublight speed (?)
- Jury-rigged maintenance
- Slow turning (?)
- Lightly armed (?)
- Lightly armored (?)

Description: ([member='Thorn'], this is all yours. Dunno what history/description you wanna do)
Who Can Use This: The Dragon's Thorn Pirates

The bits with the question marks are basically "pick one or the other". I'd suggest either making it fast and well-armed with medium-ish armor and good turning or making it slow and dropping a crapload of armor and weapons on it.

[member='Kath']
 
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Affiliation: Crew of the Dragon's Thorn
Manufacturer: Crew of the Dragon's Thorn
Model: N/A
Modularity: Yes. Due to the fact that the ship is held together through the use of scavenged parts, it is very easy to replace or add components
Production: Limited
Material: Durasteel, Alusteel, Bronzium.
Classification: Corvette

Length: 200 meters.

Width: 75 meters.

Height: 75 meters.

Armament:
  • 12 Capital Guns
  • 6 Warhead Launchers
  • 4 Defense Guns

Hangar: Squadron Count-1

Special Features: (Provide all of your submission's special features, including non-combat items and special weapons, here in a list. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Shields, Engines)
-Standard Navigation System
-Back Up Standard Navigation System
-Standard Life Support System
-Back Up Standard Life Support System
-Standard Targeting System
-Back Up Standard Targeting System
-Advanced Sensors Suite (Including bio and heat scanners)
-Medical Bay
-Escape Pods
-Numerous Quarters
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Maneuverability Rating: 13
Speed Rating: 8
Hyperdrive Class: 2

Strengths:
-Well armed
-High performance rebuilt engines (Sublight and Hyperdrive)
-Large amount of back-up systems
-High speed both in and out of atmospheres

Weaknesses:
-Low armouring
-Low turning speed
-The ship is barely held together and requires constant maintenance

Description:
Development Thread: If needed.
Intent: To create a ship for the use of Dragon's Thorn.
Who Can Use This: Dragon's Thorn Crew Members.




[member="Thorn"], how's this?
 
[member="Ydrin"]

He makes personal tech, mostly, but yeah he could at least design guns. The things I mentioned are already canon, however. Just can't use wikia on this old scrap pile of a laptop.
 

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