Other Space Kaiden
Better than other-other space Kaiden
Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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Approved Tech The Cloak of Yun-Yammaka
- Thread starter Other Space Kaiden
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Under Review.
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[member="Krahl Shai"]
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Other Space Kaiden
Better than other-other space Kaiden
[member="Lily Kuhn"]
done and did!
done and did!
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[member="Krahl Shai"]
A system's distance of communication with a yammosk is too far. Rewording it to "long ranges" will be fine.
Biological immortality, to my knowledge, still falls under one of the character creation rules regarding immortality (it isn't allowed), so while I understand what you're inferring here, it will need to be less directly referring to immortality.
Please lower either the blaster or lightsaber resistance to very high.
Address the above and I believe this is ready for approval.
A system's distance of communication with a yammosk is too far. Rewording it to "long ranges" will be fine.
Biological immortality, to my knowledge, still falls under one of the character creation rules regarding immortality (it isn't allowed), so while I understand what you're inferring here, it will need to be less directly referring to immortality.
Please lower either the blaster or lightsaber resistance to very high.
Address the above and I believe this is ready for approval.
Other Space Kaiden
Better than other-other space Kaiden
[member="Lily Kuhn"]
All done!
All done!
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Approved.
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