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Approved Starship The Atin Ruug'la Jag

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Jagen Wren

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Affiliation: This ship is a somewhat heavily-modified CEC Starrunner-class starship used by the Mandalorian Initiate Jagen Wren.
Manufacturer: Corellian Engineering Corporation
Model: Starrunner-class starship
Modularity: Jagen has added a few custom components in place of the factory-models, but other than that, nothing can be unattached then have something else take its place easily.
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, Titanium, Turadium, Duraplast, Transparisteel,
Classification: Personal Transport/Gunship/Dropship

Length: 31 meters

Width: 14.75 meters

Height: 9.43 meters
Armament: This ship has an armament rating of 14 due to its rather heave amount of weaponry/defenses, which include:

(I don't really need all of this junk ) Special Features:

Maneuverability Rating: I'd give this ship a 4 in terms of maneuverability, it's not super crazy maneuverable like a TIE but it's not slow to turn like a CR90 Corvette, think of how fast say, the Millennium Falcon would turn.
Speed Rating: This ship has a 4 in terms of speed, kind of like above, it's not blindingly fast like the Falcon, but not as slow as a CR90 Corvette, imagine how fast the Slave I is.
Hyperdrive Class: 1.9

Strengths:
+ Extreme Armament: This ship is a force to be reckoned with, it has laser cannons, blaster turrets, proton torpedoes, concussion missiles, and ion cannons.
+ Protective Alloys: The hull is made from the combined power of durasteel, titanium, turadium, and duraplast.
+ Superior Sensors: The ship has a PK-8F Short-Range Primary Threat Analysis Grid, a Collision Alarm, and a Rear Warning Sensor, giving it almost a 360-degree technological visibility.
Weaknesses:
- Power-Draining Armament: The weapons of the ship drain a lot of power, so it would not be wise to fire them for an extended period of time.
- Short Sensors: The sensor range does not extend that far, leaving the pilot blind to ambushes from far-away.
- Heavy Hulk: All of the alloys and electronic components weight down the ship by a lot, leaving it somewhat slow on takeoff and in atmospheric flight.

Description: This ship used to be a standard Starrunner-class starship made by Corellian Engineering Corporation, Jagen Wren, a Mandalorian purchased it somewhere in the inner rim nearly a year ago and outfitted it with some desired modules and alloys, mostly from old T65 X-Wings and their bomber counterpart, the B-Wing. The ship has somewhat average maneuverability and speed for a ship of its class and size, though having a above-average armament.

Inside the ship can hold around eight (8) passengers with a fully loaded cargo bay, which is quite small since some of it was converted into extra component space and living area. Inside of the living area is a bed and standard hygienic devices including emergency supplies and rations which can last about a three days with the maximum crew count (8). Jagen also added a personal landspeeder to the ship which can be used for planetary travel and the works. The ship also sports a nice reddish-gold color scheme with the Clan Raxis logo in some spots.
Development Thread: If required by Factory Judges.
Intent: A personal armed transport for the Mandalorian Jagen Wren, for exploring the galaxy and getting places, and defending himself from the enemies of the Mand'alor.
Who Can Use This: [member="Jagen Wren"] is going to be the one using it the most, given that it's his personal ship, but if push comes to shove, anyone from Clan Raxis (i.e. [member="Jack Raxis"] [member="James Justice"]) may use this depending on the circumstances and if Jagen allows it.
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="Jagen Wren"]



Jagen Wren said:
Production: Unique

Jagen Wren said:
Armament: This ship has an armament rating of 9 due to its medium amount of weaponry/defenses, which include:

Jagen Wren said:
Two (2) Ax-108 "Ground Buzzer" surface-defense blaster cannons on the front and rear of the starship. (Anti-Personnel) Two (2) R-9X heavy laser cannons on the left and right nacelles of the starship. (Anti-Starship) Two (2) MG7 Proton Torpedo Launchers (Anti-Starship) Two (2) NK-3 Ion Cannons (Anti-Shield/Electronic) One (1) HM-6 Concussion Missile Launcher (Anti-Starship)
AS this is unique Its ok but in general this is a very heavy weapons load for a ship this size. More so than allowed under mass production but not by much. But with it unique its all good.



Jagen Wren said:
Maneuverability Rating: I'd give this ship a 4 in terms of maneuverability, it's not super crazy maneuverable like a TIE but it's not slow to turn like a CR90 Corvette, think of how fast say, the Millennium Falcon would turn. Speed Rating: This ship has a 3 in terms of speed, kind of like above, it's not blindingly fast like the Falcon, but not as slow as a CR90 Corvette, imagine how fast the Slave I is. Hyperdrive Class: 1.9
Normal for a ship this size with heavy hull heavy weapons like this one I would generally ask for it to be Speed 5 maneuvering 6. But since this is unique It looks good.

All in all a very good submission and ship. Approved. :)
 
[member="Jagen Wren"]

Love the ship. However, given the Armaments on it please change the speed to 4 and armament rating to 14. (A CR90 would be around 6 and an X-Wing 3)
 
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