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Approved Starship TF-13 Predator

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: Create a Starship for The Family
Image Source: Google Image, Sci-Fi Starships
Canon Link: N / A
Primary Source: N / A


PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Taobh Dorcha Industries
Affiliation: The Family, TDI
Model: TF-13 Predator
Production: Semi-Unique

Material:


TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Light Corvette
Length: 90 meters
Width: 35 meters
Height: 30 meters
Armament: Moderate



Defenses: Very High


Hangar: Very Low
Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
Speed Rating: Low
Hyperdrive Class: 8


STANDARD FEATURES



ADVANCED SYSTEMS



Strengths:

  • D-fence!: From the materials to the features, the ship was designed with defense being it's strongest attribute in mind.

Weaknesses:

  • Turtle. Turtle: The ship is slow.
  • I Can't Even Spell Manuvawhatever: The ship's maneuverability, like it's speed, is horrendous.

Description:

For the ship to run efficiently, it requires at least five-six crew members. The cargo capacity for the TF-13 is massive compared to ships of it's class. The need for this much cargo space was a must, as the ship can act as a transport / merchant ship; where it can sell wares and other objects of value around the galaxy; which can be doubled into a smuggler's ship. However, the ship lacks any hidden compartments.

Outside the crew's quarters, there are four separate quarters built into the ship, either allowing for extra crew or miscellaneous bodies. In total, the ship can hold a maximum of ten bodies. Built next to the medbay, rests the ship's personal cargo, such as medical supplies and consumables.

The ship came with advance systems. First, was the baffler, which made the ship's exhaust hard to detect by another ship's sensors, with along came the scrambler; which would hide the ship's signature from other ship's sensors as well. Along with these features, came the sensor mask, which made it difficult for other starships to detect them. Finally, there was the optical shield, which distorted visual observation, the shield worked in conjunction with the sensor mask.
 
[member="Xiang Vang"]

This looks pretty solid!

Just wanted to point out that you might be missing a word on your second weakness. I think you meant "the ship's maneuverability, like its speed, is horrendous." If you want you can update this for clarity and then I'll stamp it.
 
[member="Xiang Vang"], this looks like it is bordering very close to being stealth that is equivalent to a cloaking device, which is regulated to semi-unique ships.

I'd like to see some caveats in the description of the stealth systems so that there is a clear understanding that this isn't something quite as capable. A side option to this would be to eliminate one or two of these systems outright.

Alternatively, you could move the production of this ship to semi-unique.
 
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