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Approved Tech Tercepts ExoSuit

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Caelen_Tercept

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  • Intent: Personal Exosuit for Caelen Tercept
  • Image Source: (This image here is only the top, which shows why it isn't that protective. As you can see, the arms are bare. While this suit does have a chestpiece, there isn't much else protecting the arms. This is the same look for the rest of the body, as well.) https://charlieintel.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/06/exo-frontback1.jpg(Here's another one.)
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  • Canon Link: Not sure?
  • Restricted Missions: None.
  • Primary Source: None.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: MultiPurpose
  • Weight: 22 Kg
  • Quality: A solid 7, but this could strongly vary during the rp if items on it break and he needs a quick piece
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Jetpack
  • If the suit is ever to short out, it automatically releases itself from Tercept, allowing no harm to be done to Tercept, since it is connected to his brain.
  • Vibroknucklers on the hands. ( http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Vibroknuckler )
Strengths:
  • On the outside of the hand of the exosuit, energy shields the size of bucklers can form, allowing it to block blasters shots, and lightsabers. However, once a saber hits it, it will overload, causing the shield to force itself into re-charge mode
  • Decreased reaction time(Takes him shorter to react to some things), The way this works is the suit connects to his body, allowing the sensors on the exoskeleton itself to detect things such as slugthrowers, saber strikes, or energy bolts. Of course, he cannot react to all of these in time, even with the suit's reaction time, but he can certainly try.
  • The suit itself might be heavy, by some standards, but is light to him. it's been attached to his body for so long, he's actually used to it, and a weakness to this already is when he steps out of it, it causes him to become disoriented and do things he thinks he can do because his mind believes he still has the exosuit on. making it believe that it is apart of his body.
  • Generally increases all physical aspects of him(5x Strength, 2x Speed, 3x Jump Height.)
  • Allows him to see left and right of him, just not behind him, of course.
  • Cortosis mail weave is another strength, allowing for the suit to take some blows, and short out lightsaber strikes.
Weaknesses:
  • Extremely weak to EMP attacks. If hit, the whole exosuit will shut down, causing Caelen to become sluggish as the exosuit is now not working, and he'll probably step out of it.
  • Takes time getting used to it if he is kicked out of it, and will sometimes lift stuff by heart that he used to be able to lift with the suit.
  • Restricts him from the more acrobatic side of things, limits some mobility.
  • Not that protective, to be honest, due to the thin protection of the arms and legs, without other armor a blaster shot would easily hit him.
  • Reduces stamina when using it.
DESCRIPTION
When Caelen was introduced to the Rebel force, he had already had his ideas down. Now more of a lone-soldier under the Rebel Private rank, he's taken the liberty to use the Rebel's supply and upgrade his own armor. Sleek and easy to cover, the exosuit is a simple suit of light armor that is more for utility, rather than actual armor, however it does protect what it can. It's built to protect the back especially, and go on the outer side of the arms. Like a ribcage, it wraps around the chest, giving him some protection and room to breath. For the torso down, his side and front is given that skeletal look like the arms, and a cover for between the legs(can i say it's canon that this is one of the stronger parts of the armor?). Whether it's running or jumping, Caelens Exosuit can get the job done!

Lets look at abilities. The abilities of this suit are it's jetpack, energy shields, and it's Vibro-knuckles. The jetpack is an ordinary jetpack, High speed, with a low fuel cost, and can actually recycle fuel, but sadly it doesn't have a high fuel capacity, allowing it to be in the air for a good ten seconds, before needing to land and begin the recycling process which takes a good minute. His 'energy bucklers' form on the outer side of his palm. It can block lightsaber strikes, however this will force the shields into a recharge mode, not being available for three minutes. And finally, Caelens main Melee: The Vibro-knuckles. These vibrate and do more damage with this addition, along with being more durable due to Tercept giving more protection to this part. That's pretty much it.
 
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Caelen_Tercept said:
The suit itself might be heavy, by some standards, but is light to him.
  • To clarify - will wearing the suit still drain the wearer's stamina the way a regular heavy suit would?
  • If so, please add that to the weaknesses.

Caelen_Tercept said:
his decreased reaction time allowing him to block most shots as long as they aren't close range.
  • This would suggest that the suit improves reflexes by several magnitudes, which is considerably too high. Please tone this down.
  • Please also explain how the suit decreases reaction time.

Caelen_Tercept said:
On the outside of the hand of the exosuit, energy shields the size of bucklers can form, allowing it to block blasters shots, and lightsabers. However, once a saber hits it, it will overload, causing the shield to force itself into re-charge mode
  • Add this to strengths.

Caelen_Tercept said:
Tercepts armor consisted of a light Cortosis weave on the outside, worn like chainmail, and it was much more seen around his hands and wrist, where there were two layers. Under this was very thin desh plating, and was mostly made of Alum, with a final layer of Duraplast and Durilium.(I don't know if an of this is possible. I was just looking up Star wars metals)
  • Please provide hyperlink to the wookiepedia links on the materials.
  • Cortosis can short out lightsabers, please add this to strengths.

Caelen_Tercept said:
Not that protective, to be honest.
  • The suit has cortosis, which is not only resistant to lightsabers but can short them out.
  • It also has shields which block blasters and lightsabers.
  • This seems to contradict both of these features. Please clarify what it's not protective against.

Caelen_Tercept said:
The knuckles of the exosuit have a vibration similar to a vibro-blade. This meaning that when punching, it can carry out and damage armor more.
  • This would damage the wearer's handbones severely. Please remove this feature.

Let me know if you have any questions.

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Caelen_Tercept

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Aria Vale said:
  • To clarify - will wearing the suit still drain the wearer's stamina the way a regular heavy suit would?
  • If so, please add that to the weaknesses.

  • This would suggest that the suit improves reflexes by several magnitudes, which is considerably too high. Please tone this down.
  • Please also explain how the suit decreases reaction time.

  • Add this to strengths.

  • Please provide hyperlink to the wookiepedia links on the materials.
  • Cortosis can short out lightsabers, please add this to strengths.

  • The suit has cortosis, which is not only resistant to lightsabers but can short them out.
  • It also has shields which block blasters and lightsabers.
  • This seems to contradict both of these features. Please clarify what it's not protective against.

  • This would damage the wearer's handbones severely. Please remove this feature.

Let me know if you have any questions.

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Most of thish as been explained above, along with the picture of the top part without the chest piece. I will say something else about the vibroknuckles.
As I am not that familiar with them, could the heavy vibratiions be stopped by a hard rubber in between the knuckles and the actual vibrations? Just curious.
 
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Caelen_Tercept said:
Due to it connecting to his brain and 'tricking it' making it believe that it is apart of his body, it does not lessen his stamina by that much.
A heavy suit that 'tricks' your brain into thinking it's light would still drain your stamina to wear and use in combat, please correct this and add it to weaknesses.



Caelen_Tercept said:
his decreased reaction time allowing him to block most shots as long as they aren't close range.
This is still the same, please dial down its strength.



Caelen_Tercept said:
http://starwars.wiki...i/Vibroknuckler These are the things I were talking about.
This is different from a suit with vibrations in the knuckles themselves, but if you want to add these then that's fine.
 

Caelen_Tercept

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Well it is light armor, it's also not heavy. By 'trick' I meant that it's been attached to his body for so long, he's actually used to it, and a weakness to this already is when he steps out of it, it causes him to become disoriented and do things he thinks he can do because his mind believes he still has the exosuit on.

And okay, thank you for allowing me to use them.

And I will, my apologies.
 
Caelen_Tercept said:
Well it is light armor, it's also not heavy. By 'trick' I meant that it's been attached to his body for so long, he's actually used to it

22kg is pretty heavy armour. Even if he was accustomed to its weight, wearing the suit would still have drawbacks such as faster energy/stamina loss. Please add this to your weaknesses.



Caelen_Tercept said:
Vibroknucklers on the hands.
Hyperlink to the wiki page for these here.

You are still missing the first image's source.

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