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Tanno Rand's Armor

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To flesh out Tanno Rand's armor.
  • Image Source: Tom Clancy's Ghost Recon Breakpoint
    tannorand.jpg
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Armour
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Resistances
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Very High
- Kinetic: High
- Lightsabers: Very High
- Other: Average

SPECIAL FEATURES
Strengths:
  • The armor is intended to be very tanky, to the point where it'll take many, many bolts and hits to take down Tanno in this armor.
Weaknesses:
  • Heaviness, while it doesn't hinder his movement, it is clunky to wear and in close quarters situations, he won't be as quick when he needs to defend himself upfront.
DESCRIPTION
The armor made for Tanno Rand when the Iron Company became an official PMC, being the leader, he could only accept the best based on his needs. He wanted something that allowed him to walk through a battlefield, not unscathed, but still standing. The solution to this need is this armor, to which he continues to wear even after his company being disbanded.

The intent is to take on as much damage as possible, while he can deal a fair amount back in return. He accepts the clunkiness as an acceptable drawback for what he gets out of the armor.
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Tanno Rand"]

Hi there. Before putting this to a formal review, I'm going to request that you make some basic alterations to bring it in line with the armor template (found below under the spoiler).

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: (Example: 'A personal weapon for Darth Scabious' or 'an advanced armored personnel carrier for the Republic')
  • Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
  • Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)
  • Primary Source: (Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: (Kuat Drive Yards, BlasTech Industries, [Character Name], etc.)
  • Affiliation: (Individual Character Name (an individual PC/NPC who is permitted to use this item), Company Name(s) (Companies authorised to use this submission), Faction Name(s) (Factions authorised to use this submission, Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase), Open-Market (May be used by any character without permission from the Manufacturer), other potential options include a submitted NPC unit, or another general organisation/group.)
  • Model: (Example: E-11 Blaster Rifle. For submissions where a model wouldn't be appropriate, such as a custom walking stick, put 'N/A' for 'Not Applicable'.)
  • Modularity: (Can components of this submission be swapped out for other components? Is it especially easy to modify? For most submissions, put 'No'.)

  • Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: Small task force, not entire factions.), Minor (Large groups of characters. (IE: Multiple factions, companies, or groups.), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.) Characters refer to NPCs & PCs. For armor utilizing restricted materials please review their production limits here.)
  • Material: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable, to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.')
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: (Anti-Blaster, Anti-Ballistic, Multipurpose, Other)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Very Light, Light, Average, Heavy, Very Heavy and Extreme.)
  • Resistances (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration. We recommend using this spreadsheet tool to maintain general balance, but its use is not mandatory.Increasing weight, lowering production levels, or reducing resistances gives more room to increase resistance ratings elsewhere, typically on a one-for-one tradeoff basis.)
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
- Kinetic: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
- Lightsabers: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
- Other: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • (Short brief detail list on any advanced systems with a respective link to the technology if available. What are the types of advanced systems that this armor has? This includes stealth, Bio-restorative technology, power armor, Force Enhancements, Alchemy Enhancements, Force Imbuement enhancements, or any similar or equivalent Force or technologies that may be rare or specialized. - If these are notable enough to be strengths, you must add them to strengths)
Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission. Any resistance ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)(If your armour is vulnerable to specific types of attack (e.g. Ion/EMP/Lightsabers) please list these here)
DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Tanno Rand"]

No worries, the submission itself is fairly solid across the board. Just a few housekeeping things to cover before I can approve.



Tanno Rand said:
Tom Clancy's Ghost Recon Breakpoint
I know this art comes from in-game, but if you could just hyperlink the wikipedia page for Breakpoint, that'd be great.



Tanno Rand said:
Material: Stygian-triprismatic Polymer Plate, Phrik Helmet, Armorweave Kevlar

Likewise, can you link Stygian-Triprismatic polymer, Phrik and Amorweave with their associated wookieepedia entries.



Tanno Rand said:
Whimsy Shield

And since this is a closed market submission, you'll need to provide proof of purchase or assorted approval from the manufacturer.

Do that and I think this is fine to approve.
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag [member="Runi Verin"], [member="John Locke"], [Member="Alden Akaran"] or [Member="Zef Halo"].
 
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