Approved Tech [Suvian Sciences] DRX-11 Gun

[Warren Century]

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*But the pic may vary, depending on the tastes of the user.



Intent: To provide the first line of fire-arms availible for Suvian.
Development Thread: If needed
Manufacturer: Suvian Sciences
Model: Based off of the Verpine Shatter Gun.
Affiliation: Suvian Sciences/Buyer
Modularity: Not yet.
Production: Minor
Material: Durasteel, slug thrower components.
Classification: Slug Thrower
Size: This comes in three sizes, but the default size is about that of a pistol.
Length: 13 inches
Weight: 5 KG (Loaded) 2 KG (Unloaded)
Ammunition Type: Bullets
Ammunition Capacity: 10 shots, before changing clips.
Effective Range: 75 meters
Rate of Fire: Semi Automatic.
Special Features:
Scope
Description:

A gun based off of the design of the Verpine's Shatter Gun weapon, and that of a rail gun this uses magnetic fields. However, this does not make the technology invincible. Magnets could be used to mess up the circuitry of the gun and cause it to misfire, or jam up. Ammo is also a problem. This comes in a pistol form as the default, although work is being done on other models of the weapon so as to create a more versatile one. Really though anyone below Master level with a light-saber would have a hard time blocking shots from this weapon, due to the speed at which it fires. This weapon will be improved upon as time passes, by Suvian. But for now it is a a basic magnetic pistol. Extreme heat or cold would be most effective at disrupting this weapon as would the presence of other magnets.

 

[Writer]

[member="Jeff Solaris"]

We're going to have to make some substantial edits, otherwise I'm going to have to deny this submission unfortunately.

So, let's get to work..

• Can you try to locate some type of image?
• Affiliation? Who? Open Market?
• Production, please pick one. Changes can be done on Submission Modification Threads
• Size, again, Pick one?
• Length, How long is it?
• Weight, well the Verpine Scatter gun was around 1kg, presumed unloaded. So, go with that and give me a loaded measurement.
• Ammunition type, change to Slugthrower
• Ammunition Capacity, change to 30 rounds per magazine.
• What is the Maximum Range?
• I would suggest you change the description where you say it has a hard time to block, and specify if the individual is a Padawan or a Master.
• I would suggest you change the description on the variants. I thought it only was a pistol.
• Remove the Machine Gun and 140 yard range unless you're making it that type, if you are remove the pistol portion.
• If you want a DNA Sensor with explosive ordinance to prevent unauthorized use, please create a development thread of atleast 10 substantial posts. If not, remove it.
• I would remove the copyright and patented technology piece, probably been around long before Suvian Sciences ^_~
• I'm not sure I understand the last sentence. " as could people who can bend extreme heat or cold such as certain force users."

 

[Warren Century]

Edits sufficiently made. Later I'll request the rifle and machine gun variants of this.

 

[Writer]

[member="Jeff Solaris"]

Please review my list above and compare it to your submission.

There are still some minor edits to be made, such as Length and Width. There is no standard, so do your best to estimate, please.

Please mention me when you're finished.

 

[Warren Century]

Edits finished, I do believe.

 

[Writer]

[member="Jeff Solaris"]

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Lief]

Approved.