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Approved Tech Sukai's Nanban Dou

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose
  • Weight: 6ky Average
  • Resistances
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Very High
- Kinetic: Very High
- Blades: High
- Lightsabers: Average
- Sonic: Low
​-Electrical: Low
- EMP/ION: Average
- Elemental: Average

SPECIAL FEATURES
Strengths:
  • Sturdy: Designed are the use of lamella and combinations of certain layers bolster over all defense as well as giving it ion/emp protection
  • Lightside: Designed with the synthweave/skylar and able to be channeled or infused with the force more easily to enhance and bolster its defensive capabilities and thus darksiders will feel uncomfortable around it.
  • Calming: The force crystal within it makes the layer of plating able to calm others and the user keeping them focused.
  • Absorbital: Set as a coating on the exterior of the plating and under armor padding means the set has strong anti blaster and ballistic properties.
Weaknesses:

  • Vulnerable: With the weave designed for it force wise the vulnerability of it breaking and being destroyed when attacked by a strong enough darkside attack is highly possible.
  • Required Force connection: With the synthweave.Skylar there is a required force connection to keep the effects and enhancement active. In the smaller models for personal equipment such as speeders, weapons and plates for armor it uses the connection of the wearer if they are force sensitive
  • Kinetic Impact: Though it does not tear or allow sharp force trauma the shythweave is not able to block kinetic blunt force meaning that if his anywhere but the armor plating the wearer is subjected to busing.
  • Exposed point: TO make the armor easier to move in there are many exposed point around the suit that lack armor plating and can be exploited by a well aimed attack.
DESCRIPTION
Though having a Sythmesh robe at her disposal Sukai had to opt for an actual combat suit of armor sooner or later. As such with the help of Sasori went about making a light/medium Samuri style suit of armor in the Nanban dou style. Though not seeming like much the Lamella styled armor over vital area's and layered clothing makes the suit much more protective then people would think and also give Sukai the recognition as a Samurai. When combined in combat with Shishio Sukai becomes a force to be reckoned with.
 
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[member="Sky'ito Yumi"] - Hello! Thank you for your patience as I've reviewed your sub. I believe this submission has a lot of character but is in need of some significant balancing.

  • For "Primary Source" please link and cite the sources which you are modifying in your submission, not the source of the image used.
  • Your ratings are overpowered and are not supported by a reading of the materials linked. I recommend lowering Lightsaber resistance to "Average."
  • Since the strengths come from another sub, I won't request an edit, but it should be clear that the level of discomfort, if any, felt by Dark Side characters around this armor is at the discretion of the opposing writer.
  • In addition to dropping Lightsaber resistance to "Average," another reasonable weakness for the submission would help to balance it.
Please tag me when you're ready for me to review. Thanks!
 
Losing is tempoary, giving up is permanent.
I have changed lightsaber rating to average and put in electrical defense in a low, though as for the main source what do you mean exactly?

In addition though I do know the whole feeling uncomfortable thing is a the digression of my rp partner I would also point out that many Sith do the exact same thing with similar item and heavily pressure writer to take that into account. Though I will not force anyone to when writing I would assume that most people would not meta game and just simply ignore it to win.

[member="Natasi Fortan Vitalis"]
 
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Hi [member="Sky'ito Yumi"] - thanks for making your edits.

This is where I'm asking you to edit, the Primary Source:
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Per the template it should reflect the item that is being updated in this submission. The link to the photo shouldn't be included there.

I don't see that you've added another weakness. Please do so and tag me when you're ready for me to review.

Thanks!
 
skin, bone, and arrogance
[member="Sky'ito Yumi"] Sorry if I've not been clear. Per the template, the Primary Source should be the piece of Star Wars technology you are updating with your sub. If this isn't based on a Star Wars technology already existing (either canon or Chaos canon), this field should say N/A. Otherwise, looks good!
 
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Ah I see, from what I have seen with most posts and from what I have done myself primary source seemed to be what you looked up or searched to get the image you where using and cannon link was for if it was used in star wars [member="Natasi Fortan Vitalis"]
anyways edited
 
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