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Spark to the Finn for Master

[member="Jorus Merrill"]
[member="Anastasia Rade"]
[member="Mia Monroe"]
[member="Veino Garn"]
[member="Chloe Blake"]
[member="Siobhan Kerrigan"]
[member="Khaleel Malvern"]
[member="Jericho"]
@Aralyn Gyndar
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Y'all know the drill. Hella active, all Underground threads. Leggo
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[member="Veino Garn"]

Great question.

OOCly, being a master means the character is developmentally ready for it through thread/story-line arc. I think Spark's there through everything she's been through and the challenges she's faced and how she's responded to those challenges.

ICwise, I think it would give her a chance to expand on her story but really, she'd just keep doing what she's doing and go toe-to-toe with the sith and continue the work to support the Underground. She'll still have several major character weaknesses that have always been there. Those aren't going anywhere. Master would help to even her playing field when going against other sith masters and help lessen Coren's likelihood of a heart attack.
 
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I don't feel as though there's enough development, this is what I'd expect to see for someone freshly Knighted.. Maybe a little more advanced. But not for Master. I feel like she needs to be active in some more threads, particularly ones where her character is one of the principal members of said thread rather than a fleeting figure.


Her threads are sparse. I looked at the training and pre-training threads, and about half of them contain <5 posts (rough estimate) from Spark Finn. My estimate may be off, but the point is, her participation in those training threads is pretty light. It's probably more appropriate for a Knight, but definitely light for a Master.



Just not enough meat and potatoes for a Master IMO. I'd really like to see her flesh out this character past the surface of a supportive role. Overcome some great personal challenges, test her skills a bit more, teach a few others. She sits very comfortably, to me, as a mid-level Knight.
 

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