Vereaux
Mr. Dizzy Man
Alright, since everyone is posting up critiques for their stuff, I might as well post too =P
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16195-sorin-vanado/
I'm not particularly happy with the format, and intend to change it. I'm also trying to develop him chronologically, so a lot of what he will eventually be has not been shown, but I'd like thoughts on how I've done so far ^-^
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16195-sorin-vanado/
I'm not particularly happy with the format, and intend to change it. I'm also trying to develop him chronologically, so a lot of what he will eventually be has not been shown, but I'd like thoughts on how I've done so far ^-^