Feedback So how am I doing?

[Quartz_Soldier]

I have been here for a year and a bit now, and I am wondering how I am doing. I would like feedback on my writing and characters to see how well they are doing/or badly.

No holds barred.

Please could I have feedback on these frequently written characters?

Erion Justeene
Isidor Justeene
Vulcan Krayt
Diocletian Kahmen’’a
Tovald Kahmen’’a

Have at it with roasts!

 

[Marcella Fiora]

Diocletian Kahmen’’a

Absolutely love Dio, I believe we all do in TF! He just needs to be more confident, assertive and start work on these wonderful plans he's got!

 

[Shai Maji]

I don't know the rest of the charries all that well, but Erion, Vulc and Isidor I've seen enough by now. Overall I dig how diverse each one is and how entirely different each one's story is.

Naturally Vulc is my fav of the bunch, dude is a good mix of light hearted humour and serious Mando action when needed. TBH I don't really have any critique or stuff to add, you're doing a solid job. Keep it up, dude!