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Sleeves Of Redemption

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  • Intent: Darth Laesis Fear arm armor
  • Image Source: Created by Bing AI
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Darth Laesis
  • Affiliation: Darth laesis
  • Market Status: Closed (Unless Darth Laesis is killed, than this armor/weapon can be taken by the player who destroyed Laesis)
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No.
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Steel, Amphistaff, The gas that this armor uses: LSD Gas, Nitrous Oxide, Carbogen
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multi-purpose
  • Weight: Very light.
  • Resistances:Very High
    • Energy: Very much protection
    • Kinetic: Very high
    • Lightsabers: 100%
    • Other: Medium
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Once per fight, if the player that the user is going against allows it, Gas comes out of the armor producing high amounts of fear. It makes the player see their worst nightmares for 1 minute straight. This also makes the opponent of the sleeve's user, weaker.
STRENGTHS
  • 100% resistant over lightsabers
  • Very strong over other attacks
  • Gas is very strong
  • Gas weakens enemies
WEAKNESSES
  • When releasing the gas it takes much force energy
  • This type of armor is insanely rare and can be worn down. Each month it usually has to be remade.
  • Gas takes a long time to regenerate
  • If the player that is fighting the user somehow explodes the armor, it will probably cause the gas to be inhaled by the user himself
  • If the player wears a respirator or a gas mask, then the gas is literally unusable
DESCRIPTION
This type of armor is very very old. It was half made my Darth Laesis' dad, which he could never finish. Before the death of his father, the father left the armor to be finished by Laesis himself. Laesis at the young age of 16 finished the normal armor. But recently just added the gas. This gas induces his opponents worst nightmare in their heads for around a minute. At this time Laesis does not attack but only poke fun at his victim, and it makes his opponents force weakened. They are steal armor, but when they shoot out the gas it usually comes from a small hole out of the front of each arms. 1 full arm of gas = 30 seconds of the gas. So he usually pours gas out of both arms to weaken his enemies more. Since he now has be reincarnated and his lungs do not full work, the gas does not effect Laesis, which makes Laesis look fully undead.
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
Darth Laesis Darth Laesis

I will be handling this and oh lets start from the top

Intent: Darth Laesis Fear arm armor
This is not an intent, it is just the model of the armor.

Image Source: Created by Bing AI
There is no image, what was generated by the AI?

  • Manufacturer: Darth Laesis
  • Affiliation: Darth laesis
One of these will need the bio linked

Energy: Very much protection
This will need a proper rating that is on the template

Lightsabers: 100%
This will need a proper rating that is on the template

Other: Medium
This will need a proper rating that is on the template

Once per fight, if the player that the user is going against allows it, Gas comes out of the armor producing high amounts of fear. It makes the player see their worst nightmares for 1 minute straight. This also makes the opponent of the sleeve's user, weaker.
As time on chaos it fluid and able to be determined by the writer this doesn't really factor in and neither is hits allowed to be called. So this will need to be rewritten and if it is please ditch the D&D style. We don't really have 1 day, 1 fight, 1 post.

100% resistant over lightsabers
Nothing on chaos is one hundred percent immune. THis will need to be rewritten Extreme resistances to something should be reflected with the extreme resistance on the balance sheet.

Amphistaff
Where does a piece of vong biotech factor into the submission?

This will need a link as star wars may have an equivalent but is does not have nor encourages drug use.

  • Gas is very strong
  • Gas weakens enemies
Again you will need the link to the gas and wording is important as one cannot call hits.

When releasing the gas it takes much force energy
HOw does the gas require force energy to be released?

Gas takes a long time to regenerate
If the armor is self repairing which regenerate would imply it will need to be expanded upon.

Very strong over other attacks
Again this will need more explaination.

Since he now has be reincarnated and his lungs do not full work, the gas does not effect Laesis, which makes Laesis look fully undead
Are you trying to imply that he is immortal or otherwise unable to die? Per chaos rules nothing and no one is so I would remove this.

All and all this is a good start for a beginner in the factory. We'll just have to expand upon it and work out the finer points.
 
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