Approved Tech Skorpion Evo

[Acaleus Thorn]

Image Source: http://www.airsoftgi.com/Spotlight/scorpion-evo/index.html
Intent: High fire rate submachine gun with adaptable accessories and usefull for stealth missions
Development Thread: If necessary
Manufacturer: Enryu's Corp
Model: Skorpion Evo
Affiliation: Techno Empire
Modularity: It has a rail system that spins on the middle of the weapon. Makes transition for sights a lot more easier.
Production: Mass Produced

Material: Duraplast, Plastoid, Slugthrower components
Classification: Submachine gun
Size: Handheld
Length: 67 cm
Weight: 2.77 kg

Ammunition Type: 9x19 mm
Ammunition Capacity: 30 round
Effective Range: Close. Can’t match in a ranged gunfight without its accesories
Rate of Fire: 1150 rounds/min

Special Features: Comes with: Scope sights, grip handle and a silencer.

Description: The problem with blasters guns were that they werent useful during stealth mission. They make too much noise or light when shooting, doing imposible hiding in places. The Skorpion Evo is a weapon that could adapt in an instant, making it a successful for any situation. Because of the design and his low weight, the number of customization you could put were less limited than other weapon. Other fact were that it was water proof and it doesnt clogg unles, making it usefull for underwater missions.
The first problem after creating it, was the recoil. Firing all the mag in seconds created an issue, because the recoil could change the angle of the aim and make it useless. After adding a grip handle and a stock to the Skorpion, the aim improved substantially. Enough to say, the Skorpion is a white frame, ready to be painted.

Strenghts:
-High fire rate
-Usefull in stealth missions
-Water proof

Weakness
-The mag empties quickly and creates a high recoil.
-Not resistance to taking hits.

Primary Source: None

 

[Rusty]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Rusty]

Hi, my name's Rusty and I'll be your Factory Judge for this submission.

First things first: you've got things all mixed up. Please stick to the Ranged Template and try to keep everything in order. Once you've got that sorted, tag me and we'll take it from there.

[member="Acaleus Thorn"]

 

[Acaleus Thorn]

[member="Rusty"] Ok edited

 

[Rusty]

Thanks much.

Alright, couple of issues.

Manufacturer: Techno Union

Need a link to the manufacturer here.

Modularity: Its easy to modify

In what ways is the weapon easy to modify? The rail system might be a good place to start.

Material: Durasteel

Awful lot of stuff other than durasteel goes into a weapon like this. Looks like a fair bit of plastoid, plus other odds and ends. This section should probably read "Durasteel, Plastoid, Slugthrower Components." Keep that in mind for future submissions.

Description: The problem with blasters guns were that they werent useful during stealth mission. They were heavy and make too much noise when shooting. The Skorpion Evo is a weapon that could adapt in an instant, making it a successful close or range gun. And because of his low weight, the number of equipment you could put were less limited than other weapon. The grip handle couldn’t help too much with the recoil, because of his high fire rate.

Would you care to clarify and elaborate there a little? I need a little more detail about strengths and weaknesses, preferably separated out into two sections for the sake of clarity.

Thanks much.

[member="Acaleus Thorn"]

 

[Acaleus Thorn]

Allright [member='Rusty'], tell me its all good pretty pls

 

[Rusty]

I think that should do it.

Pending secondary.
[member="Bianca"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

<p>Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Jacobs"]</p>

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.