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Shawn "The Nexu" Drax (WIP)

Shawn Drax

Guest
NAME: Shawn Drax
Alias: The Nexu or Nexu.
FACTION: looking for one.
RANK: none
SPECIES: Zhell/Energy Vampire.
AGE: IC-unknown OOC- 160
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'2
WEIGHT: 220
EYES: Brown with gold flecks.
HAIR: Dark brown with blond highlights shaped in a Faux (fro-hawk)
SKIN: slightly tan/white
FORCE SENSITIVE: Dont know.
Gear: Shawn has leather armor from the pits of 1313 and has his Songsteel claws that retract into his knuckles. he also has his teeth that can be used as weapons.

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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES (Required: 2 Weaknesses Minimum) :
Strengths: Shawn is a man not to be trifled with. he fights with hate, rage, and pain. he is known as The Nexu because of his fighting style. He is gentle at heart but tries not to show his soft side. He would help anyone given the chance. he also doesn't care what others think of him, so he will do what he likes and if someone doesn't like it they can deal with it. He is a Energy Vampire so he takes the life of others making him live far longer than any human should be because of this he also heals from wounds faster. He is also strong and faster than humans or Near-Human species.

Weaknesses: Shawn knows to fight offensively but not so much in defensive tactics. He has what he calls "The beast" which is a feeling inside of him that wants to be lose and destroy everything in its path. He will regularly fight the beast in his head and body through dreams so he rarely sleeps. He also does not know his true self because his memory was wiped somehow. He can eat normal food its just it never fills him up all the way. he has to suck the energy from beings to he can live. He is reluctant to feed on humans because he is a giant teddy bear at heart.

SHIP:
none for now.

Personalty: Shawn acts tough all the time because of all the hardships he has faced. he will get into fights often when someone makes him ticked. he has a short temper but tries to keep his cool. He is open minded and will speak what he thinks. Shawn it truly a soft person at heart and does not want to hurt people because he does not want someone to go through what life he has. Shawn fights and fights and fights. He never gives up on anything even if its seems like a lost cause. "Why do we fall?" "So we can pick ourselves back up."

BIOGRAPHY:
Shawn grew up among the other Zell as normal. He lived his life as a child with his mother and father. Everything changed when a group of men who are still not known. came to his planet and were looking for "The Nexu" The men looked for a boy around 15 years old that had an ability to have retractable claws. Shawn did not know he had such powers until the men came to his home. They had beaten his family until they would tell them where "The Nexu" was. They truly did not know what they were looking for so they shot his father. Out of rage Shawn yelled into the air and charged at the closest man with inhuman speeds. The man was stabbed through with bone claws that came from his knuckles. the men had found what they were looking for and took Shawn to a secret location. In the process of taking him his family was killed except for his baby brother who they did not check to look.

Shawn was taken to a laboratory where they tested on him how he had his powers and his strength. They gave beating to him everyday of his life. The lead scientist came up with an idea to make the "perfect weapon" He would take liquid Songsteel and inject the liquid into the fully grown Shawn. when the process was done the men tried to take him away to lock him up. But with the songsteel that replaced all of his bones including his claws. With these 'weapons' he killed every man there. He had found out that the Doctor had escaped and hunted him down. It took 15 years to find the man When he reached the lead scientist he cut him into pieces from the ankles and wrists and moved his way up the body until the 'Doctor' was dead.

Shawn had made his way back to Courscant where he was caught again by people that wanted revenge for their fallen comrades. he fought bravely until his was beaten and sedated where they put him in a machine that erased his memory. For 97 years he was kept in a Cryochamber in a coma to be released when a Perfect Weapon was needed. A malfunction went off in the Cryochamber that would let Shawn loose. Shawn did not know where he was or who he was. he only had enough knowledge to function as a Zhell. he had no prior memory of his life. He was found and didn't want to be sent back into the chamber. He started to fight the men that held him captive. he had found out that he possessed songsteel claws that would come out between his knuckles. He killed only the ones that got in his way from freedom.

He escaped on his own and found out he was on a planet called Courscant. he had to hide somewhere and just his luck he ran into a smuggler. The man took him down to the lower levels of Courscant were people were lawless. he sold him (with out his knowledge) for a sum of credits to a Gladiator that would beat him into fighting for money. He has been there since fighting everyday for 3 years of his life for freedom from his "Master" the only thing he needs to escape is someone willing to help him. TBC

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I dont know if I am allow to do this because it is like a character that is not from starwars.
 

Ashin Varanin

Professional Enabler
Shawn, we all understand the urge to make a Star Wars version of our favorite things. Sometimes, though, it's a bit over-the-top. In this case, your character's bio is very similar to some canonical versions of Wolverine. You can get away with songsteel claws and such, but you might want to consider reworking the origin story into an original creation.

Welcome aboard.
 

Shawn Drax

Guest
yes someone else has told me that the bio I provided was close to the story of the original wolverine. I did not know this because I have not seen or read of the origns. I'm currently trying to think of a different bio that is different from the origins.

If you have any ideas please PM me
 

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