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Approved Vehicle Shado strike

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Image Source: http://riftsimcn.weebly.com/hover-vehicles.html

Intent: A experimental stealth vehicle for meran mechanics.

Development Thread: if needed
Here Stygium Crystals

Manufacturer: Meran mechanics

Model: SH-DO
Affiliation: Kami meran

Modularity: no

Production: Unique

Material:
http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Alusteel
http://starwars.wiki...wiki/Terenthium
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Desh

Anvilskin Composite-Ceramic Tiles

plates and a http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Nutorium http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Durite coating
and a trymantium battering ram

Role: Assault tank Personal vehicle

Height: 2 meters

Length: 5 meters

Width: 3 meters

Weight: 100 tons 90718.5 kg
Minimum Crew: 1

Optimal Crew: 1

Propulsion: Repulsorlift

Top Speed: 234 KM/H for a 30 second burst but remains at a steady top speed 88 KM/H

Armaments:

Squadron Count: 1

Passenger Capacity: 3
Cargo Capacity: can carry basic baggage over 50 lbs

Misc. Equipment:




Strengths: heavily armed armored and features a stealth option

Weaknesses: very expensive to build.
has no cargo space.
armor is difficult to repair and needs to be replaced.


Description:
made as a personal vehicle for kami meran. it is built to be a damage sponge.
the Shado is made to sit with it's power in a drip feed system only running a stealth field till a target crosses it's path
then just like a predator it powers up and ambushes it's prey.
its powerful battering ram collides with it's target and fires it's weapons in to its prey like a snake injecting venom.
Primary Source:

thanks to Draco Vereen
and Matsu ike all used with permission
 

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Kami Meran said:
Manufacturer: Meran mechanics here

The link leads to SWRP home page. Could you change that accordingly ?



Kami Meran said:
Development Thread: here beskar Here Stygium Crystals
Two restricted materials in one submission is a no-go. Pick one and change the submission accordingly.



Kami Meran said:
Squadron Count: 50? i never understand this

And I will summarize the rest:

This submission needs some serious changes. Right now, it is an impregnable fast moving fortress that can turn invisible, has too many armaments and has all sorts of defenses. Even if it is one (Production is Unique) this has crossed the border of balance. Certainly not impossible to remedy this so I will ask of you to present a more toned down version. I am going to go ahead and list what needs changing below:


  • Materials: Beskar or Stygium. Can't have both.
  • Strengths and Weaknesses: A jack-of-all trades or specializing in offense at the cost of defence or vice versa ?
  • Classification: What i see when I see this tank is more like an assault tank rather than a recon. Big, heavy and scary.
  • Speed: Part of the trio: offence, defence and speed. Think of it as alchemy, you've gotta give something to get something.

Let's start from there. Let me know if you have questions.
 
thanks. @Kad Forgin
edited to remove the beskar drop the weapons and edit speed the top speed is a burst ( think a crocodile jumping out of water in a strike. ) its slow but can lunge. all it's armor is focused on the battering ram.
sorry in rebuilding my memory of how to do sub's
 
Kami Meran said:
and a http://starwarsrp.ne...hai-la-plating/batteringram
This is made of beskar, so if the intent behind your previous edit was to remove the beskar then please remove this.


Kami Meran said:
Here Stygium Crystals
This needs to be the entire name of the thread.

Please remove this. You can list primary sources, but do not drop a large list of links to other submissions if it is not being specifically put into a field in the template.
 
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