[member="Seraphina Shel'tah"]
Having seen her in a couple of threads with my char, then looking at some more, I thought I'd also offer an opinion on Seraphina. I like you took a different route than the others; Seraphina certainly stands out among her fellow Jedi, and not just because of her pink (
) skin colour. She is pretty distinct in every way and I believe it is great to see a different kind of Jedi, someone that adds more flavour into the Order. A very good character, one that feels like a living person and not just another "I am not entitled to have opinions and feelings" kind of Jedi. Her kind and serene personality when dealing with other Jedi really contrasts with her merciless and intolerant side she shows whenever she encounters someone she dislikes.
That brings up my other point; Seraphina is a terrible Jedi. This is not meant as an offence, by the way, she is a good character. But as your title itself says, she is a zealot. When the glitz falls off, you can see someone who could frequently appear in Sith propaganda, and not in a good way. You can see she is not better than Sith; she is
worse than many of them. When she meets an "enemy", she is passionate, filled with hate and anger, very unreasonable, completely overtaken by emotions. Personally, I view her as an opposite to my Veles; whereas my Sith's empathy and kindness he often displays humanize the Sith, I believe you have taken the opposite route with your Jedi, no? Show Jedi aren't just pure do-gooders, but an Order that has their share of people that are just as bad as Sith. Make the conflict more grey rather than black and white.
Again, this is just my opinion. You can retaliate in kind
