Rhen Var's fist orbital station

[Hulnok yawon]

Classification: Orbital station

Production Line: None

Role: Planetary defence.

Height: 1066.8m

Width: 609.6m (at widest)

Power Core Generator/Reactor: Specialty mark v fuel cells.

Hyperdrive Rating: Is not equipped with one.

Minimum Crew: 120.

Optimal Crew: 150.

Armaments: 40 light turbo lasers and 10 light ion cannons.

Non-Combative Attachments: 2 Shield generators, 1 Sensor array, 1 Sensor relay, 1 Hanger bay and 1 Holonet relay

Passenger Capacity: 40 people

Cargo Capacity: 362.87392 Kg of food, drink, weapons, ammo and droids, etc.

Consumables: It is possible that the crew could survive for roughly 4 weeks/1 month on 1 shipment of resources. including oxygen tanks.

Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 10

 

[Ayden Cater]

This needs to be resubmitted within the proper template. Measurements, such as weight and length are done in metric units, rather than the imperial system used in the U.S. As well, a defense station would almost never have a speed or maneuverability rating higher than 10.

 

[Hulnok yawon]

That was the proper template and its speed and maneuverablilty was not over ten but thanks for helping me

 

[Fatty]

10 is the lowest Hulnok

 

[Hulnok yawon]

Oh sorry ill change it

 

[Hulnok yawon]

Fixed

 

[Tefka]

Please fix the capitalization and spelling of your title and your entries to be considered for approval.

 

[Hulnok yawon]

The title wasn't misspelt

 

[Hulnok yawon]

I was wondering if I could use this in a campaign I'm working on

 

[Ayden Cater]

I suggest you look at some of the Approved submissions to see what is expected of your submission. There are still imperial units where there needs to be metric units, and the station lacks a description of any kind concerning its history or purpose.

 

[Jsc]

After another review. Denied.