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Approved Tech Rhak Shuri Blades V. A-1

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Intent: To offer new weapons for assassin
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Vulcan Industries
Model: V. A-1
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Minor
Material: Durasteel and Rhak Shuri Venom
Classification: Short Vibrosword
Size: One Handed
Length: 2 1/2 ft
Weight: 1.5 kg
Special Features:
Extremly Poisonous
Short and Lightweight
Description: This blade is the first in a line of weapons bearing Rhak Skuri Venom. It is light weight and design for slashing at very close quarters. One scratch of this masterpiece of a weapon would be enough to bring down most men. Though it may take more for a force user as they are known to be more resiliant. This also means the user must be doubly careful as he might cut himself and sucumb to the effects of the poison. This poison was given through contract to Vulcan Industries as a standing deal to recieve a the vials of said poison. The poison is turned intoa metal and then used to create the edge of the blade giving it a permanent poisoned cutting power. In most cases the poison is a hallucengenic agent and can cause the victim to be paralyzed by fear.
Weaknesses
Thin blade is not meant for parrying and may break if hit to hard.
Can easily be stopped by armor
Is NOT Lightsaber resisntant
Is known to paralyze in fear from the hallucenations as well owner as well as enemy

Overall this is a HIGHLY specialized blade that is meant for assasination/capture work. It is designed to be a secondary weapon, and in cases of niche use to be a primary weapon
 
[member="Darth Morgoth"]

Alright after a quick chat I have some suggestions for you.

WITH DEV THREADS
  • In addition to the collection of your poison can you also do a short thread making the blade. 10-15 posts for this should be enough.
SUGGESTIONS
  • I would also suggest structuring your description a little better, and mentioning how the poison isn't necessarily a killing agent, but a paralyzing one.
 
[member="Camellia Swift"] do you have any suggestions sans the dev thread? I mean its weak compared to lightsabers or bigger vibro blades, honestly if it gets hit with a heavy blow from a heavy vribosword will break and does not pierce anything but the lightest (Aka standard leather) armor. I understand that the others in the series will most likely need dev threads but I feel that this is to small to warrant one.

Note I also added a table of weaknesses to it
 
[member="Darth Morgoth"]

Right, after thinking it over I believe this is ok so long as there isn't abuse. However a request was made to made to me to correct the error I made about it being a paralyzing agent, when it is simply a hallucinogen. So it doesn't kill or paralyze anyone it just makes them see things. Fix that up for them and I'll send it to secondary, sorry for making that mistake on my end too.
 
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