Approved Starship Revelation-Class Corvette

[Corey's OOC]

Image Credit: http://conceptships....harrington.html
Intent: To provide the Templar Order with a mobile training ship for the Aspirants and Masters
Development Thread: NA
Manufacturer: Arakyd Industries
Model: Revelation-Class corvette
Affiliation: The Templar Order
Modularity: Yes (Training rooms, dormitories, cargo hold)
Production: Limited 

Material: Alusteel/Glasteel 


Description: With the expansion of the Templar Order, and that of Confederate Space, the order has contracted to have this mid-sized corvette created. This ship’s primary responsibility is to allow for Masters and Aspirants, teachers and students to explore the galaxy, and to work as a quick response vessel to concerns of the Templar Order that directly correlate with training purposes.

This vessel is made to be able to survive on her own, as a vessel for Templar specific missions. What she loses in storage and weapons, she makes up for in training rooms and the beings using the weapons. Focusing on providing a mobile training center and mission center for Templar apprentices, the Revelation focuses on bringing the Templar Masters and Apprentices where they need to go, and allowing them to test their abilities against stronger vessels and forces. While a military vessel in its construction, this corvette's heart and soul are in training and preparing the Templar for whatever can come their way.

Classification: Support Corvette
Role: Training Vessel
Height: 30 m 

Width: 35 m
Length: 150 m
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Solar Ionization Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: 1.5
Minimum Crew: 5
Optimal Crew: 12
Armaments: 5 Quad-Laser Cannon Turrets, 4 turbolaser turrets
Hangar:

• 24 Confederate Starfighters
• 2 Confederate Gunships
• 4 Confederate Dropships

Non-Combative Attachments:

• Standard Communications System
• Standard Life Support
• Standard Deflector Shields
• Standard Navigation System
• Standard Sensors Package
• Standard Hyperdrive
• Holonet Transceiver
• SpyNet Encryption System

Passenger Capacity: 24 

Cargo Capacity: 4 ton 

Consumables: 3 months
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 5

 

[Domino]

Alright, sorry for the wait, just a few quick things.

You need some more about the ship itself in the description though that's a nice mission statement. Support corvettes can have 5 batteries if you want to go up that high, cargo and consumables are rather low for a military ship in my opinion even though corvettes are often pressed for space, and you've got a mag contained work center again, which if its just the hanger, you don't have to mention it because it just makes people think something weird is going on in this ship.
@[member="Marek Starchaser"]

 

[Corey's OOC]

Added more to the description. The weapons load and cargo load are purposely low to give the Templar aboard a challenge. To prepare them for life in the galaxy.
@[member="Domino"]

 

[Domino]

Alright, looks good then.
Approved pending Secondary.
@[member="Marek Starchaser"]

 

[Lief]

Approved.