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Republic of Starcrest

Grimm

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Corporation Name: Republic of Starcrest
Headquarters: Coruscant
Locations: Basilisk and Coruscant

Main Operations
1-Ship yard
2-Vehicle Manufacturing

Rationale: His father had started the company, with his death. It would be passed down to the holders, but once Alex had came back into the picture. He was given reign of the company, his purpose for it would be for creating weapons of mass destruction for his future.
Tier: 3

Description: The company was founded in 800 ABY, Salazar Starcrest was resourceful and upcoming merchant. Growing from one little planet to Coruscant, hoping to pave the way for his future children to take over the family business. The business makes it money by dealing it's products to Merchants, mercenaries and factions that have the money. Usually the business has both pay up front basis, tabs and trading product for credit towards our own. War is the main reason for the company doing so well over time, now it would change with it's new owner in tow. It does do special requests, how it is kept secret is through paying more money up front. Currently it is loyal to the Republic and Mandalorian trade worlds. The company believes in Mutual gain to share the money, as long as they share back.


Tier Three Promotions


Tier II to Tier III
  • Sign a contract with two more factions or organizations.
  1. Chandrilia Data Company
  2. InVal-uable Cybernetics
  • Make an additional three mass-production products.
  1. .http://starwarsrp.ne...9-safe-cracker/
  2. .http://starwarsrp.ne...b-90-roadblock/
  3. .http://starwarsrp.ne...19-s-842-manta/
  • Complete three miscellaneous threads.
  1. .http://starwarsrp.ne...de-of-business/ -
  2. .http://starwarsrp.ne...-pm-for-invite/
  3. .http://starwarsrp.ne...uying-stranger/
 
@[member="Grimm"]

  • As a Tier II company, you cannot have more than two locations. Even then, both locations should be relatively close to one another.
  • Your company has far too many operations. I recommend cutting them down to simply shipbuilding and vehicle manufacturing and then to find a planet with orbital shipyards to base yourself out of.
  • You're going to need a longer, more detailed rationale than that.
  • Your description is also wanting. Please include more relevant details pertaining to your company.
Tag me again when these edits are made.
 

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