Approved Tech R91 Assault Rifle

[Be'iqaronn]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Assault Rifle for the Agents of Chaos
• Image Source: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Lmqxr
• Canon Link: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Renn Garrick, Agents of Chaos
• Affiliation: Agents of Chaos
• Model: R91 Assault Rifle
• Modularity: Yes, Detachable scope
• Production: Mass-Produced
• Material: Durasteel (https://starwars.fan.../wiki/Durasteel)

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Heavy Blaster
• Size: Average
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Power Cell
• Ammunition Capacity: 60
• 
  Reload Speed: Slow
  
• Effective Range: Average
• Rate of Fire: Very High
• Stopping Power: High
• Recoil: Extreme

SPECIAL FEATURES

• 1.5x scope, and Iron sight
• 60 round power cell (located under the barrel)
• 2 modes of fire semi and and auto

Strengths:

• The gun has a very high fire rate
• Each shot does a lot of damage
• Not the biggest thing, so it can be carried around easier (heavy but takes up less room)
• On semi automatic the recoil is much more manageable
• The shots are high powered

Weaknesses:

• The Recoil is extremely high (if on automatic)
• The weapon is heavy and the clip is very heavy on its own
• Slow reload

DESCRIPTION
The R91 was created by Renn. The weapon has a high recoil and is meant to have act like a heavy assault rifle. It's shots weren't high powered the thing would be extremely weak. Originally it was designed for personal use but it transferred over to the Agents as Renn became more associated with them. This design is pretty seamless, it is an easy to use weapon and its only downfall is its recoil. It can be applied to multiple situations, but mostly breaches and close quarters. This is because with the high recoil long range shots are more difficult.

 

[Vora Kaar]

Under Review.

 

[Vora Kaar]

[member="Renn Garrick"],

Alright. We are going to take a look at your subs one at a time and work through them.

Manufacturer: Renn Garrick

Go ahead and also mention that Agents of Chaos can create these rifles. Since Individuals cannot reasonably create an entire arsenal of weapons on their own.

Model: N/A

Model would be the name of the rifle. This one would be "R91 Assault Rifle."

Not the biggest thing

I am not sure what this strength means? Would you mind explaining this?

On semi automatic it has basically no recoil

You mention here that semi-automatic fire has no recoil, yet your Recoil rating is listed at "Extreme" currently. You can have one or the other. Not both. They contradict each other. While you can say that Semi-auto is more "manageable" for longer ranges, due to being able to pace your shots, you are more than welcome too.

The shots are Armor Piercing

Other than these rifles providing a blaster bolt, I do not see anything else listed in your sub that could amplify their power to be Armor piercing. Can you please provide more details on this?

The R91 was created by Renn, it is assault rifle made for loud breaching. The weapon has a high recoil and is meant to have act like a heavy assault rifle. It's shots are AP because if they weren't the thing would be extremely weak.

I'd like to see more in the description of the rifle? Anything to beef this up a little more would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Be'iqaronn]

[member="Vigil Rostu"] done, thanks

 

[Vora Kaar]

Not the biggest thing, so it can be carried around easier

The weapon is heavy and the clip is very heavy on its own

These seem to contradict one another? Or are you just saying its heavy but smaller in size?

[member="Renn Garrick"],

 

[Be'iqaronn]

[member="Vigil Rostu"] What Im getting at is it takes up less room, I have added it

 

[Vora Kaar]

Approved.