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Approved Starship X100-class escort frigate

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION




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  • Intent: Create a multi purpose escort ship
  • Image Source: here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: here
  • Primary Source: Uchuu Senkan Yamato 2199
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: Frigate (according to Anaxes War College System)
  • Length: 333 m
  • Width: 39 m
  • Height: 99.47 m
  • Armament: High
    • 24 main laser guns in 8 triple turrets. Caliber 460mm (see the picture for the turrets setup)
    • 9 secondary laser guns in 3 triple turrets. Caliber: 155mm (see the picture for the turrets setup)
    • 12 torpedo tubes, 6 on the bow, 6 on the aft
    • 8 anti ship missiles
  • Defences: Low | Deflector shields, anti air and anti missiles batteries
  • Hangar Space: Average | 1 squadron
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 1 squadron of 14 starfighters (12 Hayabusa and 2 Rei-sen)
    • Support Craft: None
  • Manoeuvrability Rating: High
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyper-drive: 1.0
STANDARD FEATURES

  • Each turrets' barrel can be elevated independently allowing each turret to target multiple hostile ships.
  • Anti ship missiles are hidden in the false funnel behind the bridge superstructure.
  • The ship can land on planets to make the replenishment easier
  • Can launch two starfighters thanks to the catapults on the aft deck and twelve by a hatch on the bottom of the hull
  • Has a principal engine and two small secondary engines in case the main one is damage (decreasing the standard speed by 3 knots).
  • Rotatig sensor panels for detection and identification
  • Maximum speed: 50 space knots
  • All other features are standard
  • Can also land on on the water due to her ship-like shape.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS

  • Detection: this class of starships is equipped with the most precise detection system capable to determine the class and speed of any ships within range. Effective range: 200 km
  • Anchor: this class of ships is also equipped with rocket anchors at the bow, providing them suficient stability when landed on unstable grounds
  • Telemetry; The main guns are equipped with their own range-finding system for more accurate shooting
STRENGTHS

  • Man your Battlestations: the anti air and anti missiles guns have enough accuracy to deal with fast targets
  • Ennemies on All Sides: The main and secondary armament can target ennemy ships on the port and starboard sides independently in order to deal with many hostile ships
  • It's Just a Scratch: the X100-class ships can take a lot of damage and still be combat capable due to the solidity of the hull
WEAKNESSES

  • Dead Angle: the sides of the hull and the top and bottom are not well protected by the main, second and anti air batteries due to their elevation (from 0 to 70°).
  • Guns need energy: having 33 laser guns as armament requires a lot of energy, which makes the ship slower by 15 knots in combat.
DESCRIPTION:
This new class of escort frigates was ordered by the House Haskler of Anaxes in order to protect their convoys of transport ships and their fleet of capital ships. The ability to land on planets allows them to support the ground forces and makes it easier to replenish and embark people. Passenger capacity: 200 passengers.
 
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Firstly, the purpose of the image source isn't simply to post a link to the image, its to provide a reference to where the image comes from for the purpose to credit the artist as well as a few other little bits. The aim is to find a source as close to the official origin point as possible. For example, for this image, a link to SolGravionMegazords post of this image, or something from Leiji Matsumoto linking to this image would be ideal. Something like the following:
I hope this helps.
Image Source: here

Do you have a link to the permissions to use the manufacturer Dalness? This would need to be posted in 'each' app. Even if it is a catch all permission from the manufacturer saying " -name here- has permissions to use my facilities / materials for all of their apps- " if you would like to go that route. And then that wold need to be linked on each app you do using that manufacturer / material.
  • Permissions: N/A
This is going to need further explanation as to how, mostly because its very hard to visualize with this kind of ship. Are you saying that the turrets themselves are basically on rails or tracks which can rotate around the hull of the ship?
Ennemies on All Sides: The main and secondary armament can rotate to the sides of the ship independently in order to deal with many hostile ships

This ship has a LOT of guns, enough for it to be considered its own strength as being a highly armed gunship, which should be balanced with a weakness. And it is going to need at least an additional weaknesses after that please. I also feel that your armament rating should be higher. High or V high

Let it be known, that i love captain Herlock, and it made me really happy to see this app.
 
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Felix Aquila Felix Aquila , I changed the armament rating to High, added a weakness, rephrased the strength about the turrets (Ennemies on all sides), put another link for the image source and added a link to the permission (if the link doesn't work, the permission is here):
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I hope it's okay for you.
 
Thanks so much for putting up with the wall, ship looks fantastic

Although you are a little overpowered at the moment, sitting at -1, you will need to remove a point in strength increase the availability rating or push one of those average ratings into low.
 
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