Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos

Register a free account today to become a member! Once signed in, you'll be able to participate on this site by adding your own topics and posts, as well as connect with other members through your own private inbox!

Approved Tech PR-1 Ravager Heavy Particle Repeater

Status
Not open for further replies.
Alor of Clan Gred, Mando'ad'jetii
trigger-heavy-machine-gun-firearm-weapon-png-favpng-cwRL8teDzjbvqpL0PsnLtHTvr.jpg
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create a heavy repeating particle cannon.
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: Particle Beam
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Concord Specialized Technology
  • Affiliation: Open-Market
  • Model: PR-1 Ravager Heavy Particle Repeater
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Mass-Produced
  • Material: Durasteel, Particle cannon components
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Heavy Particle Repeater
  • Size: Large
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Ammunition Type: Particle cell
  • Ammunition Capacity: Large
  • Effective Range: Average
  • Rate of Fire: Average
  • Stopping Power: Very High
  • Recoil: High
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Particle bolts: While the PR-1 is a slower firing repeater, its power comes from the fact that it is a particle cannon. These bolts are explosive, and will explode when hitting both solid objects and energy fields. This makes the Ravager difficult to really defend against, even by a lightsaber.
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy firepower thanks to explosive bolts.
  • Automatic.
  • Robust weapon.
WEAKNESSES
  • Heavy.
  • Can overheat.
  • Difficult to aim precisely from the shoulder. This can make in not as viable of a weapon against smaller groups, or in one on one fights.
DESCRIPTION
The PR-1 heavy particle repeater is a new heavy weapon created by Concord Specialized Technologies in order to provide forces with effective heavy weapons. A heavy but robust weapon, the Ravager is an automatic particle cannon capable of delivering the explosive power of particle bolts down range effectively, making it hard for shields or lightsabers to really stop these weapons. While the repeater is a powerful weapon, its two main drawbacks are it's weight making it harder to aim, and the fact that it is pron to overheating with large amounts of fire.
 
Last edited:

Shuklaar Kyrdol

CEO of Breshig War Forge Consolidated
Mig Gred Mig Gred Su'cuy, vod, I'll be reviewing your submission today.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
All solid, links functional, well done. You'll be surprised how many times people forget things/get things wrong here (myself included)!

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
All solid here, only slight issue, can you please link the durasteel here?

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
You forgot to specify what classification is here. Please amend that, but otherwise everything is balanced and looking good!

SPECIAL FEATURES
Yep, that's what makes particle weapons nice. Well described.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
Difficult to permission aim from the shoulder.
Not sure I quite understand what you mean by permission aim, any chance I could get you to explain what you mean by that?

DESCRIPTION
As always, succinctly written. Makes it nice and easy to refer to.

Tag me once you make the requested changes, and we can get this moved along.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom