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Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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Sanguinius - Just some advice, this is skirting pretty close to blatant plagiarism of a copyrighted Games Workshop property. It might be a good idea to source a new name for this character, and change more than a few details as well.
What other details?
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Angeluscius - I'd recommend rewording a few of your strengths and weakness - most notably the Gift/Curse of Foresight and the blatant use of Red Thirst. The Angel of Blood thing might be a good idea to drop, especially since Sanguinius was and is the Primarch of the Blood Angels, who suffer from the Red Thirst and the Black Rage.
I mean, It should be pretty obvious as to what details you should change, especially since this is just a ripoff character with - a now - different name. lol
I mean, It should be pretty obvious as to what details you should change, especially since this is just a ripoff character with - a now - different name. lol
Fine I will delete him