Codex Denied Planet Lucian

[Lucifer Seripoth]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: This planet wasn't made for any specific purpose. Years ago it used to serve as a peaceful refuge for visitors to take shelter from planet's waging war onto each other. It doesn't allow this anymore though.
• Image Credit: Google image search.
• Canon: No.
• Permissions: N/A
• Links: Character Lucifer Seripoth | Star Wars RP

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Planet Name: Lucian
• Demonym: Lucian's
• Region: Unknown Regions
• System Name: Gole
• System Features: There's one moon and one sun known to orbit nearby this planet.
• Location: In the Bogo Rai's planet's hex.
• Major Imports: Wood & Meat
• Major Exports: Vibranium
• Unexploited Resources: Ore & Coal

GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION

• Gravity: Standard
• Climate: Temperate
• Primary Terrain: Mountain lands
• Atmosphere: Type I

LOCATION INFORMATION

• Capital City: Lucian Capital
• Planetary Features: This planet has a mixed terrain that consists of mountain ranges, deep canyons and thick woodlands.
• Major Locations: Hallowed Valley, Spring Field, Wicker Forest & The Lucian Empire
• Force Nexus (Optional): N/A
  Intent: N/A
  Nexus Name: N/A
• Nexus Alignment: N/A
• Size: N/A
• Strength: N/A
• Accessibility: N/A
• Effects: N/A

POPULATION

• Native Species: Fathier, Humans & Vulptex
• Immigrated Species: N/A
• Population: 2.0 million
• Demographics: Primarily humans
• Primary Languages: English
• Culture: It used to be a peaceful planet a couple of years ago but that's quickly starting to change. It's a planet filled with rural area's that townspeople mind their own business doing their chores and hobbies.

GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY

• Government: Dictatorship
• Affiliation: Under the control of Lucian Faction, led by Lucifer Seripoth.
• Wealth: Medium
• Stability: Medium stability. It's somewhat safe to visit here but be warned, the Lucian Empire doesn't take too kindly to disturbances and rebellion outsiders.
• Freedom & Oppression: It does have dictatorial ruler with an army behind him, this makes everyone fear their rising empire and it's either you join the Lucian Faction or you get murdered in cold blood.

MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY

• Military: A technology advanced military, their armor and weapons are made out of weapons-grade vibranium. The Lucian Empire has a strict military system, it's very organized with tons of professionally skilled troops who've been trained on combat situations for years to come. The standard Lucian soldier comes equipped with a Laser Beam Assault Rifle (LSAR). The second to last ranked Lucian soldier comes equipped with a Two-Sided Lightsaber. The third to the last ranked Lucian soldier is equipped with a Laser Beam Mini-Gun and heavily armored vibranium armor that almost seems impenetrable. The ranking system is as follows (from Highest to Lowest): Squadron Commander, Captain, Armored Soldier, Soldier, Comms Soldier & Flag Holders
• Technology: An impressively technologically advanced planet compared to the rest of the galaxy. As we speak, there's actually a whole team of researchers, engineers and computer scientists that have been formed to help create an AI known as JAVE. It'll take about one year in order to complete the creation of the program but once it's done, the AI will be heavily implemented into all of the Lucian Soldier's helmets, giving them a direct link to the Lucian Empire's database which allows for the AI to appear through a hologram through a beacon installed in the soldier default attire. JAVE will also give indications of incoming ships and attacks nearby the planet, after the initial disturbance warning it would give to passerby's, the Lucian Empire's massive vibranium laser-shooting cannon will automatically aim it's self at the incoming fleet or ship. Once successfully charged, the cannon will shoot at will if not deactivated.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The planet was first filled with rural peaceful environments thousands of years ago when it wasn't too crowded with population. However with the help of vibranium, society has risen up to what it is today. A booming capital filled with technological advancements. Once Lucifer started to successfully take over the planet, the place hasn't had too many visitors. Be warned. It's not a ghost town. It's a flourishing planet with beautiful terrain and complex styed buildings.

The rest is unknown.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Lucifer Seripoth As per this staff announcement, Codex and Factory are both closed till the 7th of January. I will be moving your submission into pre codex where if necessary you can continue to work on it. On the 7th of January please tag me or the the Codex Admin Srina Talon to have your submission moved.​

Until then no live judging will happen until the codex & factory opens in January. Please refrain from further posting within in the live judgement areas until then.​

Thanks.​

 

[Ylla Caeli'runa]

Lucifer Seripoth

[UNDER REVIEW]

 

[Ylla Caeli'runa]

Lucifer Seripoth

Hey, I see you're a new member! Welcome to Chaos and thank you for your patience through the holiday season! Hopefully so far you've gotten off to a good start. This looks like a really good first submission and I really liked reading through it. Because this is a planet submission, it will require a second approval after my review. With that in mind, here are some things that I noticed in your sub that I'd like for you to correct:

Image Credit | Usually, we like to credit the artist for their work by giving a link to the place where we found the image. This one is just a bit trickier because the only place you can find it is on wallpaper sites. Because that's the only real source that can be found, it's acceptable. I've provided one of those sites here, please use this source in place of "Google Image Search".​

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Major Exports | Vibranium is a material in the Marvel universe. Unfortunately, here on SWRP Chaos, we don't allow crossovers in submissions. Please remove Vibranium and you could either find other materials, either from the star wars wiki or in the Chaos Factory, or you would mark this field as "N/A".​

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Unexploited Resources | Could you expand on the types of ores? Per the Planet template, "Common materials and ores should just be listed (Ex. Durasteel ore), while anything special or rare should be linked". Here is the link to the Ore Wiki Page to help you in your search.​

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Capital City | Is this the name or a placeholder for the name? If this is a placeholder, please fill in the name of the Capital.​

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Major Locations | The Lucian Empire seems to be more of an organization than a location. If you'd like to keep this, please expand and have something along the lines of maybe how much of the planet the Empire is on. For a real life example, the UK consists of England, Scotland, and Northern Ireland.​

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Force Nexus Fields | This section is listed as Optional under the Template. If there isn't a Force Nexus on Lucien, you don't have to include this in your submission.​

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Native Species | Please link Fathier and Vulptex here.​

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Primary Languages | Under the Planet Creation Rules just above the Planet template, it states: "Don't use specific Earth references as shorthand instead of explaining something. Ex. 'Japanese culture,' 'Medieval Europe', etc". English does not exist in Star Wars. I believe that using Galactic Basic would be the next best thing as it's the most common language spoken across the Galaxy.​

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Wealth | Please expand this section and explain why their wealth is classified as medium. Per the template, "Wealth: [ Poor, Low, Medium, High, Wealthy. Describe, briefly, why. ]".​

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Military & Technology & History | Once again, the use of vibranium here isn't allowed on Chaos. Please have a look through the Metal Wiki Page and find a suitable replacement metal for your weapons.​

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History | Please flesh out the history of the planet. Here are the requirements of the template.​

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HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a history of the planet here. Be sure to cover the following information:
How was the planet discovered? How was the planet settled? When was it settled? Why was it settled? What major events specific to the planet helped shape its inhabitants to what they are today? If there is a Nexus, how did it come about and how did it influence the history of the planet?

Remember that these custom planets may be submitted to the map for the community to enjoy. The more background you set down, the more clearly others will be able to understand your view of your creation.]

Please tag me once you've completed the necessary edits or if you have any questions!

 

[Ylla Caeli'runa]

Lucifer Seripoth

Could I get an update on this? If I don't hear back in a few days, this submission will be archived for inactivity. If you'd like to have it pulled from the Archives, you can submit a request to the Submission Modification Thread.

 

[Ylla Caeli'runa]

Lucifer Seripoth

I'll be archiving this due to inactivity. If you'd like to have this moved back from the archives, you could request it's move in the Submission Modification Thread.

[ARCHIVED DUE TO INACTIVITY]