Planet Building

[Jordan Achilles]

So, any advice for this, or just any help at all for this planet I'm making? Any help, rather positive or negative is most appreciated.​

Green = Custom Species​

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Name: Kal Paxor

Region: Mid Rim
System: Kalp System
Suns: Kal Ren; giant orange star
Orbital Position: Habital Zone
Moons: Kal Volkor; uninhabitable moon with uranium deposits
System Features: Serpent's Ring; a ring of rock, ice and ship debris in orbit around Kal Paxor
Coordinates: Above Orb Mantell
Rotational Period: 38 Standard Hours
Orbital Period: 455 Standard Days

Class: Terrestrial
Diameter: 25,512 Km
Atmosphere: Type I
Climate: Temperate
Gravity: Standard
Primary Terrain: Islands of Varying Size, Deep Seas, Tropics, Jungles

Native Species: Tropical Fauna, flora, insects, avian, etc. The once extinct Mythosaur. Pax Serpent. Krayt Behemoth
Immigrated Species:

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Humans; 30%​

Sith-PureBloods; 40%​

Zabraks; 30%
Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic
Government: Dictatorship
Population: 10 Million
Demonym: Kallurs
Major Imports: Explorers, Scientists, Engineers, Weaponary, SpaceShips
Major Exports: Artifacts, Archaeological Findings, Mythosaur Scales and Bones, Uranium

Affiliation: One Sith

Major Locations:​

Force Nexus: Valley of the Sith​

Size: Location​

Intent: To add a reason for the Darkside temple upon the planet along with reasoning for why the inhabitants of this world would join the sith rather than the Jedi​

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(WIP)


Culture: (WIP)
Technology: (WIP)
History: (WIP)


Notable PCs: N/A
Intent: To add a unique tropical world for the galaxy along with adding a place for the mythosaur to once again exist​

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[Ultimatum]

Looking good so far. I look forward to seeing the rest fill out.

[member="Jordan Achilles"]

 

[Jordan Achilles]

[member="Ultimatum"]
Thanks

 

[Jordan Achilles]

Added Major Locations

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Major Locations:
Force Nexus: Valley of the Sith
Size: Location
Intent: To add a reason for the Darkside temple upon the planet along with reasoning for why the inhabitants of this world would join the sith rather than the Jedi.
The Hidden Temple of Naga Sadow:

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Named so due to a disturbance in the atmosphere over the area the temple is located which jams the sensors of spaceships along with hiding the area of the temple due to the heavy cloud overlay covering the island it is on twenty-four seven. This temple wasn't directly created by Naga Sadow but more of, a secret cult that worshiped Naga that went to the world of Kal Paxor to create their massive temple to the sith lord. Although it wasn't created of metal, it was created out of durable rock found within the valley of the sith as they called it upon the world. The stones could withstand quite a beating due to the interlocking stones being placed together to form a strong barrier along with heated metal being used in-between the stones to seal them together and stop them from falling apart. A tunnel that was created within the temple lead into a underground chamber in a mountain. Now, the chamber was refitted with metal along with complex structures using magma. The magma ran along the floor of the chamber covered by transpirsteel as to avoid severe breakage of the glass allowing viewing access. Within the top center of the chamber their was a temple of Naga Sadow holding up a sphere of metal with magma swirling through it as some type of strange divine meaning.
Gateway of the Sith:

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​A massive achievement of architectural wonder. It seems that a once ancient civilization lived upon this world seeing as how this gateway is more than a Millennium old. Their is no interior at all to this structure making it extremely thick. The gateway is made of pure stone. It stands at a total of 301 meters tall and it took quite a long time to make. Intricate statues are carved from pure stone blocks in the shape of two sith lords standing against the wall with swords facing downwards instead of lightsabers. For the entry way, it is a large arch spanning 100 meters in total and 225 meters tall allowing pretty much anything to pass through it's giant gates. Over the many, many years of abandonment moss and vines have grow upon it yet, it still remains somewhat in it's prime. Like a shining beacon across the world.
God Complex:
A massive structure, similar to the gateway. It was created by the now, long gone species that created the gateway to the valley of the sith For safe keeping, it was located under a massive hatch under the ocean floor to be stored within the planet's crust and mantle, safe from harm. This structure was able to control the weather and tectonic movements upon this world due to similar structures to this only smaller being placed elsewhere around the world under the crust with magnetic locks and pistons pushing and moving the plates. Although, the way the tectonic plates actually work are up for pure speculation as the way into these structures is long gone. While now, the "control complex" as it is called now is just located high up in the sky with automated drones controlling the weapon systems upon the structure as to protect it from anything that tries to get inside.

 

[OriginsoftheJedi]

Ooh.. This sounds like my kind of place. Large reptilians, jungles, and archaeology. Keep it up.

 

[Jordan Achilles]

[member="Mark Sage"]
I'll keep it up, don't worry