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Approved Species Pichlus

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Name: Pichlus
Designation: Sentient
Homeworld: Marlozrk http://starwarsrp.net/topic/34389-marlozrk/
Language: Galactic standard, Pikanu ( runes )
Average height of adults: 2.5 - 3.0
Skin color: Pale-white, Black, Gray-white, Light-gray, Dark-gray, Dark-brown, Light-brown
Hair color: None
Breathes: Type 1
Strengths:
- Iron strong bones
- Strong resistance to damage
- Hunting: Over time the Pichlus hunted, even when they began to become civilized hunting was still part of their traditions, although those who wanted to prove their skills or were gladiators or soldiers so they used primitive spears or even their fists or primitive weapons to hunt, although this is more for sport or training and only 25% of the population still do these tradition primitive hunting methods.
- Weaknesses:
- Cold: has no resistance to cold because it evolved in a arid environment, meaning if not in a protective suit or a massive environment change happens they could easily die off
- Breeding: Centuries of Cloning and genetic mutation has left the reproduction rate of this species relatively low from 100,000 births a year to 15,500 births a year, and it is decreasing every 100 years by the hundred
- Skin: Although they have powerful natural armor, the very little showing skin is tender to damage, this is one of their few weak points on their body, the foot, hands, lower back, lower upper body, elbows, and knees

Distinctions:
- animal skull-like head
- sharp bones coming out of elbow joints and knee joints
- thick jagged horns upon head
Average Lifespan: 100 standard years
Races:
Skullarian:
Armor like ribs going across chest, animal-skull like head, extremely strong
Excalmer :
Large and Muscular. Bull-like horns on both sides of head. Strong aura with the force. Iron strong bones, keen vision, Resistance to intense heat, strong resistance to damage, brute strength comes from anger and fear, black, red
Life Span: 215 standard years.
Estimated Population: 6.5 billion, found only on Marlozrk
Diet: Fruits, Meats, Nuts
Communication: Vocal, written, runes
Culture: Daily life includes, manufacturing weapons, buying meats and fruits, politics, and building. Society consists of, four separate districts, the first is the poor, slave district, the second is middle wealth, the third is high wealth, and the four district is government officials and high ranking generals and military officials. These "districts" are similar to a caste system, it is divided up this way to distinguish between who is rich and who is poor, peasants at the bottom, the middle wealth, high wealth and the government officials and military generals. This was created as a way to distinguish different people within the pichlus society, although this doesn't help mantain military control and every now and then revolts began and are brought down, except that once the faction, the Qui Republic was formed from purely rebellion. This faction was allowed to survive only because, it brought a tribute of, 2000 credits, 500 food, 650 weapons, 700 durasteel, and 50 rancor hides. The government consists of powerful ambassadors and politicians. It also consists of high ranking military officials and important scientists. Art consists of spirals, pyramids and jagged buildings. Art also consists of different colored glass and statues and idols. Sports consists of, Krayt dragon hunting, rancor hunting, and fights within the Colosseum. Military training consists of pushing your body to the breaking point, fighting with primitive weapons or against a very dangerous creature, testing your mental strength, shooting multiple different weapons, they also go through intensive physical exercises along with mental exercises. Their religion consists of 4 main gods. The different gods are, The god of death, god of war, god of famine, god of conquest. Their are many temples for each of the four gods. The largest and most beautiful temple is a large 200 yard palace with two completely golden statues of the god of death and the god of war.
Technology level: The Technological level of the planet is equal to the equipment used in the clone wars. With a exception that they have far superior soldiers and far superior battle droids.
General behavior: They are mostly a warrior like race. Going towards domination, conquest, war, and death instead of diplomacy. They will usually attack anybody who comes to their planet including jedi. Very few times in their history have they ever gone to diplomacy.
History:

9900 BBY
The Pichlus come into existence on Marlozrk.

9730 BBY
The Pichlus discover fire for the first time.

9522 BBY
The Pichlus discover copper and begin to make copper weapons. The Copper Age begins.

9300 BBY
The Pichlus discover and begin to make iron weapons and tools. The Iron Age Begins.

9100 BBY
Multiple Pichlus factions and kingdoms are created.

9000 BBY
The Ancient kingdom, The Oligoth Empire is created. The Emperor "Piclus Laryx" becomes emperor of the Oligoth Empire

8850 BBY
A New emperor, "Olig Laryx" takes charge of the Oligoth Empire. The Oligoth empire conquers many kingdoms and regions.

8700 BBY
The Oligoth Empire goes to war with the Azunic Kingdom.

8650 BBY
War ends between the two empires with the capturing of the Azunic Kingdom's Capitol "Azunicus Temleus" Meaning, "The City of Gold" in Ancient Pichlus.

8460 BBY
The Oligoth Empire loses many lands to the Barbarian Warlord "Azun Hilk Opptiommo" meaning, "The son of Conquest" in Ancient Pichlus.

8449 BBY
The Barbarian Warlord is killed when his army of 6,500 followed by 3,500 troops is attacked by, "General Augustus Tracnus". The General had 8,500 troops and the warlord had 10,000. 9,505 of the warlords troops are killed while 5,777 of the General's troops are killed

8449 BBY
War starts between the "Oligoth Empire" and the "Irctaznia Empire".

8449 BBY
Pichlus forces are held back at a large choke point along a gigantic mountain spanning 788 miles. This Chokepoint is a large path into the heart of the Irctaznia Empire. The Irctaznia Empire sends Tamed rancors and krayt dragons to the Chokepoint.

8449 BBY
After nine months of being held back at the Chokepoint, the Oligoth Empire's forces push through and take the Chokepoint. The Oligoth Empire marches a army of 10,000 to a large fortress spanning 250 yards with General Augustus Tracnus in charge of the army.

8449 BBY
Oligoth Forces are held back once they reach the fortress because of hundreds of catapults and ballistics. Also because of Wild rancor's roaming the Area. The Oligoth Forces establish a large camp 121 miles from the fortress.

8448 BBY
After five months of being held back, the Oligoth Forces push through and attack the fortress.

8448 BBY
After 12 days of siege, the Oligoth Empire storms the Fortress at Dusk.

8448 BBY
After three hours of fighting the Fortresses defenders are killed. General Augustus Tracnus kills the Irctaznia Empire's Great General "General Balicus Olicus Pilicus".

8445 BBY
The Oligoth Empire makes it to the Capitol of the Irctaznia Empire. But, they are held back, both for reinforcements and because of constant flaming catapult barrages and bow barrages.

8445 BBY
After 89 Days of being held back the Oligoth Empire's Army gets enough reinforcements to besiege the Capitol.

8445 BBY
After 18 days of siege the Oligoth Empire attacks at midnight on the 18 day.

8445 BBY
After 6 hours the Irctaznia Empire falls. The Irctaznia King falls by the sword of General Augustus Tracnus

8445 BBY
The War officially ends with the Destruction of the Irctaznia Empire, any remnants of the Irctaznia Empire hide in the mountains of Marlozrk.

8445 BBY
General Augustus Tracnus becomes Emperor of the Oligoth Empire.

8440 BBY
Emperor Augustus Tracnus has a son by the name of "Maximus Octavius Tracnus The II."

8425 BBY
The Oligoth Empire goes to war with the "Tyrak-Olympus."

8423 BBY
The Tyrak-Olympus Empire forms a peace treaty with the Oligoth Empire, The Oligoth Empire gladly accepts.

8420 BBY
Empereor Augustus Tracnus is killed when his royal army of 10,000 is ambushed by the remnants of the Irctaznia Empire now know as the "Ondrizlia."

8420 BBY
After the Death of Empereor Augustus Tracnus, War starts between the Oligoth Empire and the Ondrizlia with their allies Tyrak-Olympus.

8419 BBY
Many Outposts are besieged and lost to the joint alliance now know as the "Ralicus." A Large fortress which many of the Oligoth Empire's troops come from, is besieged and attacked.

8419 BBY
It takes 7 hours, but eventually the fortress falls and the Oligoth Empire takes a heavy blow, the 3000 reinforcements didn't get to the fortress in time. The Reinforcements set up a large camp upon a choke point which is the only way into the core nations of the Oligoth Empire, they put wooden palisades down around the opening of the choke point and put 2000 archers behind the pallidness and 10 catapults and 4 ballistics.

8419 BBY
The Chokepoint is taken. Maximus Octavius Tracnus The II forms a army of gladiators, rancors, legionnaires, mercenaries, the royal guard and even two large Acklays clad in iron with towers on their backs ( Similar to War elephants).

8419 BBY
Maximus Octavius Tracnus The II has a son by the name of "Octavius Augustus Tracnus The III." He sends his son with 500 legionaries, 20 centurions and his wife across the sea in a cargo ship guarded by 4 legionnaire ships.

8418 BBY
Maximus Octavius Tracnus The II sends all remaing peasants, mercenaries and legionaries to guard the royal palace since this is the last place free of Ralicus Control. 20,000 troops guard the royal palace along with 60 catapults, and 70 ballistics.

8418 BBY
The Royal palace is besieged for 2 months before being invaded by a large 30,000 Ralicus barbarian horde. The Royal City falls within a 10 hour battle. Maximus Octavius Tracnus The II falls when he is struck with 8 arrows in the chest and 2 in the back, his body fell into the river flowing through the city. The Royal city was burned and razed and all of the dead Oligoth Empire Bodies were thrown into the river or burned. The Barbarians buried their dead. The Ralicus Leader "Alickus Julius Olympus" takes Maximus Octavius Tracnus The II sword from the river. The Sword has a gold trim and is made of pure iron and silver with a snake design on it. It was passed down from 5 generations.

8417 BBY
The Oligoth Empire has officially fallen, lasting almost a 1000 years. Octavius Augustus Tracnus The III lives in a hidden fortress within a mountain.

6500 BBY
The Descendant of Octavius Augustus Tracnus The III has been seen for the first time in 1000 years. He is know as "Alexander Octavius Tracnus."

6550 BBY
Alexander Octavius Tracnus marches with a army of 10,000 knights, and legionaries, to reclaim the lost royal city of the Oligoth Empire.

6547 BBY
Alexander Augustus Tracnus reaches the city and finds it in ruins with stone everywhere and moss growing on statues and ruined buildings. Alexander orders his 2500 peasants he brought with him to keep the statues and rebuilt everything else better but repair the palace and statues.

6545 BBY
The Rebuiltion of the Royal city is 50% complete. Alexander Augustus Tracnus orders that tombs should be built for his currently dead blood line and for those to come.

6539 BBY
The Royal city is rebuilt and remained "Alexandria-Augustus."

6530 BBY
Alexander Octavius Tracnus has a son by "Maximus Augustus Tracnus."

6510 BBY
Alexander Octavius Tracnus dies of old age. Maximus Augustus Tracnus becomes Emperor of the New Nation "Oligornuth Empire."

6500 BBY
The Oligornuth Empire sends 1000's of peassents and 200 knights and 100 legionaries to rebuild and build new fortresses and castles and even a few towns across the ransacked Oligoth Empire land. A Large rive is being created around the Royal temple, along with a huge bridge. Many roads are being constructed.

6400 BBY
The Fortresses. Roads, castles and towns have been rebuilt/built. Construction of a large wall and gate has begun at the choke point and valley into the Oligornuth Empire's lands.

6000 BBY
The Wall and gate has been completed after 400 years. The Tranus blood line continues. A Large trade port had been completed for the royal city, many bridges have been completed. Ancient Oligoth Empire temples and strongholds have been found on the mountain top surrounding the Oligornuth Empire, theses temples and strongholds have been explored for the first time. 450 miles are being used for farms and 250 for fishing. The Pichlus find gunpowder weapons inside the strongholds. Oligornuth Empire Alchemists begin making gunpowder trying to make a immortality potion. The River and bridge has been completed after 500 years.

6500 BBY
The Origus empire has been created.

5000 BBY
The Origus Empire controls 7.8% of the Marlozrk, the Oligornuth Empire controls 12.2% of the planet. The rest 80% of the planet is wild.


4555 BBY
Great Mysterious Pyramids Begin appearing and being constructed upon Marlozrk, strange beams of blue light come out of a Large Tomb built into a cliffside.

4145-3663 BBY
Multiple Force-Sensitive and powerful Pichlus are drafted into the sith ranks

3653 BBY
A Pichlus Sith Lord by the name Darth Venuis kills and disarms 5 jedi-council masters before having his right arm cut off, and a lighsaber scar going across his left eye.

3600 BBY
The Pichlus begin development upon blasters, armor and some walkers.

3600 BBY
The Pichlus form a renegade faction know as the, Ever-lasting Sith.

3550 BBY
The Pichlus finish development upon blasters, armor, and walkers. They begin construction upon a large Durasteel Pyramid. Construction begins on a large Colosseum.

2956 BBY
The Durasteel pyramid is finished. The Colosseum is finished.

1000 BBY
A Pichlus hybrid has appeared for the first time know as a, Excalmer. Only 20,000 have been found upon Marlozrks moons.

980 BBY
The remnants of the Ever-lasting Sith flee to Sycra Naliga for peace and to build up their power.

500 BBY
The Large tomb built into the cliffside is being explored for the first time in 2000 years. The Pichlus construct a fleet of 3 star-ships.

500 BBY
The Cliffside is sealed up after a ancient creature is discovered in it. The Empire of Marlozrk is split into three pieces, The Original Empire, The Sevor Syndicate, and the Qui Republic. War Ravages between the Major three Factions

300 BBY
The 300 year war has ended with more then 2 billion dead ( Their were originally 5.5 billion but then it decreases by 2 billion because of this war )

100 BBY
The Pichlus have begun creation of a droid army.

32 BBY
The Three Major factions join together and join the Trade Federation in the blockade of Naboo.

22 BBY
The Factions of Marlozrk join the Confederacy of independent systems in the Clone Wars.

19 BBY
The Marlozrk capitol ship Magnetic Astero Executioner and their fleet Destroys 10 republic ships before the capitol ship is shot down by a orbital bombardment while hovering over the Planet Coruscant during The Battle of Coruscant. The Pichlus send drop ships carrying droids, walkers, troopers, and tanks down to Coruscant. Droids and some troopers land in the Hangers to sabotage some republic venator-class cruisers and drop ships. The Other drop ships land on the planets surface. They make on large building into their base of operations until a orbital bombardment fires at the building, killing all droids, and troopers inside. Anti-Air turrets fire down the rest of the drop ships. The Drop ships remain outside of the planets atmosphere and fire upon the republic venator-class star ships. Once 4 Marlozrk ships are destroyed the rest of the Pichlus fleet retreats to be repaired at the Orbital repair platform located in their system.

19 BBY
The Pichlus kill any jedi on their planet with their droids

19 BBY
The Pichlus send 50 clones on their planet to cryo-pods. The Pichlus begin constructing a cloning facility and droid factory on their planet.

19 BBY
The emperor sends garrisons of droids to the planet Marlozrk

16 ABY
The main three Marlozrk factions go back to their normal lives

35 ABY
The Factions wage war

40 ABY
The War finally ends. ( By now their were 5 billon, but it decreased to 3.5 billion )

100 ABY
Construction has been finished for the cloning facility and droid factory. They begin army of battle droids.

560 ABY
Construction of the army has been finished. The Pichlus prepare plans to invade felucia.

566 ABY
Massive droid armies are sent to the planet Felucia to gain a grip within the galaxy. They establish a base upon the planet. Rebel troopers try to reinforce the planet with help from local bountyhunters. War has officially started between The Republic and the Pichlus empire. The Pichlus sent one of their strongest military generals, General Cockliys, A Pichlus that wields a lightsaber of a fallen jedi from the old republic era.

567 ABY
After 17 months of assault upon Felucia the pichlus conquer the planet. The General Cockliys slays 2 powerful bountyhunters, but is heavily wounded after a tank takes a shot at him. His body is recovered from the battle and is being outfitted with mechanical body parts to help him live and and to replace missing limbs.

567 ABY
3 months after the captuing of Felucia General Cockliys is rebuilt and is renamed General Exarnus.

567 ABY
General Exarnus is sent into Cryo-sleep to be of use later on.

568 ABY
Multiple Colonies are established upon Felucia to maintain control.

570 ABY
Ten fortresses are established upon Felucia to maintain a military control upon the planet. A eleventh fortress is created that is know as Exarn Rell Collinus. This fortress is both the biggest fortress and the most fortified, and it is named after General Exarnus.

600 ABY
The 3 three major factions join together, To form the Telcano Empire.

669 ABY
After a century of controlling Felucia, rebellion starts to break out. A elite legion of Pichlus know as the, 901st legion is sent to the planet. One of the few remaining Clone ARC troopers is sent to be in charge of the army.

700 ABY
Rebelling stops for many years.

700 ABY
The Pichlus sends the 608th legion, the 325th legion, and the 707th legion to the planet Sycra Naliga to establish a base.

701 ABY
After 16 months of assault upon Sycra Naliga, the Pichlus establish multiple colonies upon the planet and they establish one fortress upon the planet.

701 ABY
After 7 months, contact is lost with all of the colonies and frequent attacks hit the fortress hard. The Pichlus send General Exarnus ( He has survived this long only because of being put in cryo-sleep after the battle of 567 ABY ) Along with the 901st Legion. Many tanks, walkers, droid carriers, and gunships are sent down to Sycra Naliga's Surface.

704 ABY
After 20 months the Silicorna are nearly destroyed, the Silicorna are enslaved. The Cryligors escape the planet with their capitols and many transports, fighters, and bombers. The Silicorna capitol ship is destroyed after the Pichlus lost two 4 star War-machines.

705 ABY
After capturing Sycra Naliga, many new outposts, forts, and colonies are established. The Pichlus find many artifacts upon the planet including one that says that in the deep future they will become a widespread empire and destroy all who appose them. They also find many lightsabers from the old republic and technology from the old republic in the archives of the Cryligors capitol city.

706 ABY
General Exarnus is put into Cryo-sleep. The Cryligor Capitol is transformed into a huge fortress and citadel upon Sycra Naliga. A super tank know as the War-Horse of War, is being constructed in the underground factories under the Cryligor Capitol.

710 ABY
The Super tank has been completed. Explorers find a old Sith tomb with Sith holocrons and a few jedi holocrons of forbidden arts and of fortellings of the future. The holocrons are sent to the fortress to be examined by the top Pichilus scientists.

750 ABY
Revolts start on Sycra Naliga. The Pichlus lose contact with 6 of their 18 colonies.

750 ABY
The 608th legion, the 325th legion, and the 707th legion are sent to try and stop rebelling.

780 ABY
Three of the twelve colonies on Sycra Naliga are captured by the Silicornas.

801 ABY
Rebelling starts up again from high taxes. The 901st legion is sent to the planet with, Tyranus Collik, on of the few descendants of General Cockliys/Exanus in charge of the legion.

820 ABY
The Pichilus send clones bred from their cloning facility to Felucia to try and stop rebellion. The clones were made from a gene from the famous bounty hunter, Yuill Oppil, a mandalorian bounty hunter. The 901st legion is outfitted with anti laser armor and Tyranus is outfitted with anti-tank armor. Five military-grade war tanks are sent to Felucia along with Ten Military-grade War-walkers ( AT-WM ).

821 ABY
Rebelling continues upon the Planet Sycra Naliga, the Pichilus send in twenty Military-grade war tanks and fifteen AT-WM. Commander Razer, a powerful clone ARC troopers is awoken from cryo-sleep and sent to Sycra Naliga to stop Rebellion.

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Intent: To add diversity to the galaxy. To add a sentient species to Marlozrk.
 

Theophenes

Stark raving silly
[member="Hydran Galimin"]


Okay, I actually do like the idea of a tall, ominous race of butt-whupping burly dudes. However, the history conflicts a little with the way stuff currently is on the site, so you'll have to make some edits as follows.


The current year on-site is 837 ABY. The republic as it currently exists was found in 835 ABY. The other issue is that you have a lot of history with the Republic, which wasn't something they were aware of. I'd appreciate you talking to the Republic and figuring out what elements in this history the Republic can agree with you on before we get further into details, because this story is partially their story too.


Join the Republic faction, and talk with them about this submission in their OOC section. I'm sure they'll be happy to lend a hand on helping you build this rivalry and treaty storyline in a way that works out for everybody. There's a lot of interesting discussion here, and we may have to do a little role-playing to set the foundation. For now, take a look at the timeline, then shoot a post to the Republic, letting them know what's happening here. They'll be better able to help you figure out the history of the Reps and their system of consideration. Personally, based on what I'm seeing here, I'd recommend a skirmish or two and then a treaty/parley thread to get this plot going.


Again, there's some great material here, and a good story. We just need to weave it together a little tighter with some Republic contribution.
 

Theophenes

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[member="Hydran Galimin"]

Are you still working on this? It's been a few days, so I'd thought I'd check in. If you're working on the edits, let me know. If not, I'm going to move it to our archives section.


Please tag me in a response to this thread. Thanks!
 

Theophenes

Stark raving silly
I understand your issues with the republic, but the timeline still needs correction. There wasn't any Republic in the 600's, everyone was dying of the Gulag Plague.


This timeline is the most accurate source. The Republic as we know it came about in 835 ABY. Now, you totally could have tried to take Felucia well before the Republic was formed, and currently have a disputed claim you wish to make a treaty over. You established a colony way back when, but now the Republic has control over it, as the map indicates. That will give you an issue to discuss with their leadership. However, it may not automatically result in either of you laying claim to the planet.


Try a re-write along those lines, without the aggression on Coruscant, and we might be able to make this work.


[member="Hydran Galimin"]
 
[member="Theophenes"]

This is what I got

" The Galactic Republic Faction was founded in 835 ABY, in our timeline, following a treaty signing on Coruscant by the Confederation of Systems.

Nothing that happened before 835 ABY is a concern of this Faction. Also. We are a custom player-created Faction not found anywhere in StarWars canon. No one belonging to 'The Republic', 'A Republic', or 'Any Republic', before 835 ABY, has anything to do with our Faction. We do not affiliate ourselves with any 'Republic' government that existed before 835 ABY. "

from Jerry Mars
 
Hydran Galimin said:
[member="Theophenes"]

This is what I got

" The Galactic Republic Faction was founded in 835 ABY, in our timeline, following a treaty signing on Coruscant by the Confederation of Systems.

Nothing that happened before 835 ABY is a concern of this Faction. Also. We are a custom player-created Faction not found anywhere in StarWars canon. No one belonging to 'The Republic', 'A Republic', or 'Any Republic', before 835 ABY, has anything to do with our Faction. We do not affiliate ourselves with any 'Republic' government that existed before 835 ABY. "

from Jerry Mars
Sorry for re-post, it's just that I'm inpatient. It's just part of my nature.
 
[member="Theophenes"]

This is what I got

" The Galactic Republic Faction was founded in 835 ABY, in our timeline, following a treaty signing on Coruscant by the Confederation of Systems.

Nothing that happened before 835 ABY is a concern of this Faction. Also. We are a custom player-created Faction not found anywhere in StarWars

canon

. No one belonging to 'The Republic', 'A Republic', or 'Any Republic', before 835 ABY, has anything to do with our Faction. We do not affiliate ourselves with any 'Republic' government that existed before 835 ABY. "

from Jerry Mars
 

Theophenes

Stark raving silly
[member="Hydran Galimin"]


Sorry for the delay. You've made the changes to the history, so I think we're good here. This is approved pending further review by a judge.
 
@Theophenes @Hydran Galimin Checking this over.

One of my issues is they have a very vanilla weaknesses, things that are easily over come - I would like to now how they were able to do this and how and why their reflexes are the way they are. Did they evolve over time? Please provide weaknesses that balance their strengths. Also you mention about them having "districts" is this similar to a caste system? How did they get to that caste system. You're everywhere with what type of society and culture they possess. One more thing you state that they were hunters, then all of a sudden they stopped yet retained their enhanced reflexes, how do they retain the reflexes, why did they stop hunting and move towards a more "civilized" way of society?


There are a lot of holes that do need to be filled and I suggest extending the Culture and the History of the Species especially if they're going to be Sentient. Players are going to want to create a character with the race you're introducing to our story. Please give them as much information as you can - to help them develop their characters.


Because of this, I'm returning this work into a Work In Progress. Please tag me when you've completed your work.
 
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