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Approved Tech Patriot-class Armor

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William Bradley

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William Bradley
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION


PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Voodoo Military Supply Co.
  • Model: N/A
  • Affiliation: [member="Darson Ontonas"]
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Phrik, Durasteel, Agrinium Mesh
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose
  • Weight: 14 kg
  • Quality:​​
    Kinetic: 4
  • Melee: 8
  • Ion: 10
  • Energy: 8
  • Lightsaber: 7

SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Phrik
  • Body Glove
  • Cybernetics

DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Phrik: A Very Resistant Material allowing him to fight off opponents with many different kinds of weapons.
  • Body Glove: Regulates his life signs and temperature keeping him cool.
  • Cybernetics: The armor is equipped with cybernetics which allow it to work in sync with the other cybernetics equipped in Darson's body.

Strengths:
  • Heavy Armor: Due to the use of Phrik in the armor it has a high Resistance to many things.
  • Lightsaber Resistant: The Phrik allows the armor to be resistant to lightsaber strikes.
  • Environment Resistant: The body glove helps regulate the users life signs and keeps the wearer cool.
  • Joints: There are spots in the joints of the armor that allows the user to be flexible and agile in it.
  • Cybernetics: Cybernetics are installed that connect with the armor allowing for it to work in sync with other cybernetics.
  • Ion Resistance: Due to the use of agrinium mesh this armor has a high resistance to Ionic and EMP like attacks.
Weaknesses :
  • Permanent: Due to the cybernetics installed it is impossible to completely take it off without harm to the user.
  • Environmental System Malfunctions: Sometimes after long times in extreme environments the regulation system will malfunction and the user will get extremely hot or cold depending on the extreme conditions.
  • Joints: Due to there being no armor on the joints they are open to assault by another person.
  • Kinetic Assaults: Due to the need for heavy Ion resistance this armor is lacking in the protecting the user from Kinetic attacks.
DESCRIPTION

Having worked with equipment from Mylls Survival Co. now renamed Voodoo Military Supply Co. and found their equipment reliable he went to them to get his custom set of armor made for him. He had a very particular set of requirements for his armor and he had high hopes that they could do it for him.

The armor that was asked was definitely unique indeed. It needed to be able to work in sync with the previous cybernetics already installed in the body of Darson so they had to have him in for 12 hours a day for almost a week to figure out how to properly equip him with the armor he required and the connection to the cybernetics he possessed.

The armor also needed to be very resistant to multiple different kinds of assaults so Darson and Felix decided that using Phrik was in there best interests. Making the armor took several weeks to make because it required such a delicate operation but when it was made and finally attached to Darson, it was a masterpiece.
 

Netherworld

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Netherworld
<p>Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.</p>
 

Netherworld

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[member="Felix Hardy"]

Solid sub, just a few kinks to iron out, and we'll be good.



Felix Hardy said:
Heavy: Due to the use of Phrik in the armor is heavy an requires a lot of strength to carry it.
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  • It was used in the construction of extremely light and durable battle armor – Wookieepedia
  • This weakness is fine on its own, but Phrik wouldn't cause this.
  • Omit the Phrik reference and just have it be heavy – actually heavy, as 14kg isn't a lot for a full battle armor, think more 20kg+
    OR
  • Drop this weakness
  1. I'd also like to know what happens to the user if they're exposed to EMP/ion damage.
    The sub doesn't mention any resistance or weakness, and given that the user is basically tied into the cybernetics, the effects would be pretty extensive.
 

Netherworld

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Netherworld
[member="Felix Hardy"]

Apologies, I seem to have missed that.


Raziel said:
Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission. (If your armour has any specific resistances to types of attack (e.g. Ion/EMP/Lightsabers) please list these here))
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  • Any resistances need to be listed under Strengths
The joints are obviously a weak spot, and kinetic damage is the classic downfall of saber-resistant armor. Fix the above, and this is good to go. :)
 

Netherworld

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Netherworld
[member="Felix Hardy"]

The Armor template, from which I quoted before:

Raziel said:
Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission. (If your armour has any specific resistances to types of attack (e.g. Ion/EMP/Lightsabers) please list these here))
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  • I know it seems like I'm being a hardass, but in practice, the Strengths & Weaknesses are what someone will scan if they encounter a submission being used in PvP. Thus, the aim is to provide the most important information at a glance.
  • Please follow the rules and add the Ion/EMP resistance to your Strengths
@mention me with edits or questions
 
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