Shiraya's Odyssey
I've been writing Briana for about a solid month now and I've found her to be rather enjoyable to write but, that doesn't mean others necessarily enjoy reading her. Ultimately, I want my writing partners to enjoy the experience as much as I am. So, here I am, seeking out the advice of other writers on Chaos for some feedback, trying to improve in whatever ways I can. Does the character read well? Are her posts entertaining enough, or does she seem boring to read? Do I need to improve in my own writing somewhere? Add more details? Better convey the nuances of her personality? Let me know what you think. If you haven't written with me, but have read some of the character, feel free to share your opinion as well.