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Approved Starship Obliterator Class Bombardment Corvette

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Obliterator Class Bombardment Corvette

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a corvette specifically designed for bombardment of ground or capital ship targets.
  • Image Source: Here.
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

  • Manufacturer: Firemane Industries & Technology
  • Affiliation: Closed-Market & Firemane
  • Model: FM-CV005
  • Production: Limited
  • Material: Standard corvette components.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: Bombardment Corvette
  • Length: 150m
  • Width: 70m
  • Height: 50m
  • Armament: Very High
  • Defenses: Low
    • Standard armour plating
    • Standard deflector shields
  • Hangar Space: No combat squadrons. Limited shuttles & escape craft.
  • Hangar Allocations: N/A
  • Maneuverability Rating: High
  • Speed Rating: Average
  • Hyperdrive Class: Average
STANDARD FEATURES

  • All standard features.
  • Hyperdrive.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS

  • Deathstrike Concussion Missiles (Type 3)
  • Communicator with strong encryption.
STRENGTHS

  • Bombardment. The Obliterator is a terror against ground targets. Anything not beneath a secure orbital shield will quite likely be turned to rubble by the massed targeted missiles of the corvette.
  • Onslaught. The Obliterator can also turn its missiles against enemy capital ships by rearing up and launching volleys into the target. This has the firepower of 2 squadrons of bombers, so cannot be underestimated!
WEAKNESSES

  • Combustible. With so many very explosive missiles on board in such a narrow space, the ship needs to avoid heavy enemy fire. One misplaced explosion will turn the ship into a giant firecracker.
  • Defences. Despite being armed like a bomber the Obliterator ironically needs to fear enemy bombers and fighters as it has limited defence guns. Escorts and support are vitally important.
DESCRIPTION
Designed in some ways as a replacement or crossgrade of the old Fulminatus Corvette, the Obliterator was designed to give Firemane a good ground bombardment option. During Firemane’s campaign on Tephrike they found they lacked very good options for orbitally bombarding enemy positions with precision. Turbolasers and even individual bombers lacked the co-ordinated accuracy required to minimise civilian or undesirable target destruction.



There for using the Deathstrike missiles usually employed on bombers, the Obliterator has the equivalent of 2 Judgement Class squadrons worth of launchers. These can direct accurate, devastating and long ranged fire from the atmosphere to the ground. However, in a space battle it can also prove useful by firing volleys of missiles at enemy capital ships in a way which is hard to block. This, especially if the corvette can use its speed to get into a blind or weak spot allows it to do potentially massive damage to the enemy ship very quickly.



The key weakness is the same as its strength. The missiles, 128 in all, are stored in the ship itself. Despite precautions to keep them safe a single accurate penetrating shot in the right place can spark a chain reaction which can shatter the corvette like a firecracker. This is especially true as the ship needs to ‘rear up’ and show its belly mounted launchers to an enemy ship it is firing upon. Further, with only limited defence guns the Obliterator needs to be protected and escorted to prevent enemy bombers or escorts attacking it.
 
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Tegaea Alcori Tegaea Alcori ,

Thanks for taking the time to use the Factory. I am going to be working with you through the review and approval stages of the Factory, so hopefully this can be a quick and painless process:

Deathstrike Concussion Missiles (Type 3)
If it would be possible for you to link these, that would be greatly appreciated, thanks

Bombardment. The Obliterator is a terror against ground targets. Anything not beneath a secure orbital shield will be turned to rubble by the massed targeted missiles of the corvette.
Just a suggestion here, but we typically advise to stay away from absolute language such as "will be" in this case as it removes suggests that what might happen consequentially to a character is not that character writer's decision. My suggestion here would be to change the wording to something more akin to "is likely to be" or "would probably be." Even just leading with terminology such as "There is a high chance" or even "Chances are" would be great here.

Please be sure to tag me with any changes or clarifications made to the submission, or if you have any questions.
 
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