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NPC Creation(Jimmy Carvan)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: To have as an apprentice.

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Role: Apprentice

PHYSICAL INFORMATION

Age: 17

Force Sensitivity: Force Sensitive/Untrained

Species: Chiss

Appearance: Blue skin he wears dark black clothes and has red eyes that are filled with pain and suffering most the time he wears a turtleneck he is about 6,1 and he looks mature for his age he also has decent muscle mass broad shoulders and long legs with big hands.

SOCIAL INFORMATION

Name: Jimmy Carvan

Loyalties: Darth SiRiDio

Wealth: Middle class because he is sith apprentice and uses his skills to rob and steal.

Notable Possessions: Single bladed blue lightsaber.

Skills: Mastered no skills

Personality: The boy is very aggressive he will steal or beat anyone who pisses him he learned it from his master as the boy adopted most of his master's traits as aggressive he steals a lot he has no mercy or heart unless for animals in which case he will protect them with a fierce fury.

COMBAT INFORMATION

Weapon of Choice: Lightsaber

Combat Function: He has just began his training from Darth SiRiDio he has not yet become very skilled at the use of the force or lightsaber combat but he is superior to most normal beings.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

He was a slave from birth until he was 7 when a family of Togrutos took him in but at the age of 17 Darth SiRiDio killed his family and took him from them to become his apprentice so he is naturally very angry but has loyalty for his master.
 

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Darth SiRiDio said:
Combat Function: He has just began his training from Darth SiRiDio he has not yet become very skilled at the use of the force or lightsaber combat but he is superior to most normal beings.
  • Please outline the NPCs Strengths and Weaknesses as well. What is he good at? In which areas does he fall short?
Please also expand on the HISTORICAL INFORMATION information section. The minimum is one good paragraph, but you can of course spring for more.
I would suggest devoting a bit more attention to his experience as a slave – how was he treated, what kind of work did he do, etc. It would also be worth noting how Jimmy overcame his anger for his Master if Darth SiRiDio is the one who killed the family who saved him from slavery. Try to give a bit more insight into this character and flesh him out more for your and others' use in Roleplay.

When you've made the required edits, please @mention me here, and we can proceed with the judgment. :)
 
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