Approved Tech Nathan's Kyber Crystal

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To make a Lightsaber Crystal

• Image Source: https://www.deviantart.com/venjix5/art/Sapphire-Crystal-render-alt-3-777960171
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Name: Nathan's Kyber Crystal
• Manufacturer: The Force, Nathan Bloodscrawl
• Affiliation: Nathan Bloodscrawl
• Market Status: Open-Market
• Homeworld (optional): Recovered from Brentaal
• Production: Unique
• Modularity: Can be put in Lightsabers
• Material: Kyber Crystal

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Kyber Crystal
• Weight: Very Light
• Color: Blue in raw state
• Produces a dark blue blade when installed in a saber
• Resistances: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Kyber Crystal bonded to owner, allowing for use as a meditation tool
• Produces a Dark Blue Blade

STRENGTHS

• Cutter: When installed in a Lightsaber, it produces a blade capable of cutting through common materials
• Meditate: The Crystal, due to being bonded to its owner, can be used as a meditation tool

WEAKNESSES

• Force Voids: Will not function in Force Voids
• Vanilla: Confers no additional benefits

DESCRIPTION

A common Kyber Crystal bonded to Nathan for use in a Lightsaber, it was recovered in a Cave on Brentaal IV. Not particularly attached to it in anyway, Nathan has yet to truly try to enhance it on any meaningful level, and dislikes the act of meditation in general, meaning it rarely sees use in that capacity

 

[Krass Wyms]

Nathan Bloodscrawl

Alright we shall get into it.

• Kyber Crystal Enhanced with Alkahest, allowing for slightly increased swing speed when installed in a Lightsaber, slightly greater resistance to most Dark Side Powers (But especially Drain Type Powers)
• Able to focus and channel all offensive Neutral Force Powers with slightly greater ease
• Produces a Dark Blue Blade that has potentially slightly increased cutting power from Alkahest Enhancement
• Alkahest Enhancement allows for better ability to both sense and redirect blaster bolts

it has produced rudimentary results in comparison to other crystals of greater power

The bulk of these enhancements are not rudimentary. This would be something that even Phylis Alince who created the skill on chaos would likely balk at in terms of power.

• Force Voids: Will not function in Force Voids
• Bonding: Due to the way the Kyber was Enhanced the bond has strengthened to such a degree that any damage the crystal suffers while Nathan uses it could potentially Heavily stun him.
• Sense weaknesses: Non blaster bolt Projectiles are slightly more difficult to sense

Alkahest is at its root using the lightside to empower the items. As such it would have the same idea of alchemy. Darkside abilities would damage it more, and it would be a powerful beacon of the lightside of the force.

This crystal is looking more like it is only filled with alkahest as a buzzword. It ignores the drawbacks to minimize the weaknesses while trying to pile on the strengths purely to always have the advantage. You can easily resist powers, all of yours are stronger. You can sense all, deflect blasters, cut through materials. There are little drawbacks and this is considered a basic crystal. Which is a laughable thing. I would suggest if you are going to try and appropriate Alkahest as more then a buzzword to try and min/max weaknesses to strengths. You should study the items that have been made with it and see their limitations. Phylis is a skilled writer and put a lot of work into it and there is a reason why I don't use it in my own submissions because I wouldn't want to tarnish her work.

I will move this back to the pre-factory for the substantive edits needed.

 

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

Have made edits, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Nathan Bloodscrawl thank you for the edits

Approved