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Approved Tech Nanotechnica Textillium

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] To give my Character Madeline the material needed to complete her first major technological advancement.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Image Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]N/A[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Primary Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]N/A[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Name: NanoTechnica Textilium[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Madeline Kievra (http://starwarsrp.net/topic/144399-madeline-rose-kievra/ ) [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Madeline Kievra[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Semi-Unique[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] (However takes Kievra quite a while to create another creation unit)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Modularity:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] No[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Material: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Well Known Textiles | Small Net of Circuitry | Nanotech Replicator |[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Self-Replicating Textile[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Weight: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Very Light[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Resistances: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]None[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Color: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Once replicated, they can have any color.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]The Nanotech bots have the ability to self replicate themselves into the shape and texture of any notable textile material by command of the wearer through the nanotech chip.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Can be used to create any textile item, ranging from clothing to coating[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Quick morphing capabilities[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Nanotechnology is easily disabled by any EMP or ion blast, and can easily be destroyed by any outside acting forces calling for protective compartments[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]If hit by EMP the material might short circuit and burn out causing the wearer the possibility to be damaged from the short electrical shock.[/SIZE]
DESCRIPTION
The material, or nanotech chip was first thought of during Madeline's early years in college, however the first prototype was formulated during Madeline's first year of her Doctorates education. The prototype was a basic pod which could construct a small fabric stitch for any damaged clothing within a small amount of time. This final creation of the prototype led to Maddy discovering her main research project which was her nanotechnology. The first in her nanotechnology line was in the Textile industry of course as it was to build of her earlier design which was based around fixing small damages in clothes. This newer and perfected version of her earlier design now had the ability of self replicating its self to where if it had a proper guiding mechanism could lead to the creation of possibly entire outfits of clothes. This perfected edition of the prototype is known as the Nanotechnica Textillium, which using the nanotechnological bots is used to replicate any common known fabric, with a proper guiding rod into clothing or even more.
 
[member="WritersHand"]

This seems like a solid start to a submission, but there are a few things I need to bring to your attention.



WritersHand said:
Intent: To give my Character Madeline the material needed to complete her

You haven't completed the intent of the submission here.

You also need to include a link to the character as the manufacturer.

You also failed to include a description in your submission as well.

DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
 
[member="John Locke"] Apologies! Somehow it seems some things were snipped off when I copied this over from my google document. Nevertheless here you go, fully edited.

Thanks!
 
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