Approved Tech Nalrobian Arc Armor

[Komoda]

Intent: A personal magnetic armor made for Komoda the Gris King
Image Source: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/assassinscreed/images/c/c2/ACBF_Mayan_Armor.jpg
Canon Link: N/A
Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Badlands Legion
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Komoda
Modularity: Can be layered with different metals and alloys for extra protection
Production: Unique
Material: Neodynium Silver alloy
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Armor
Size: Large
Weight: Heavy
Resistances:
Blaster - average
Kinetic - average
Lightsaber - low
Other - N/A

SPECIAL FEATURES

Allows Suchur user to amplify their existing magnetic capabilities. Suchurs have a strong natural magnetic field gained evolutionarily through their diet of the mineral monazite which draws neodynium deposits into their scales. Covering their scales with the neodynium alloy will strengthen their magnetic field, allowing a force sensitive Suchur to better read the electrical energy passing through them and more efficiently produce force lightning. The silver also helps conduct the electricity coming off of the user, so they may use less concentration than is normally required.

Strengths: Amplifies force lightning abilities if worn by a force sensitive Suchur.

Weaknesses: User can't get within 10 feet of most electronics without shorting the whole system, and slows down user. Coming from darkside gris magic the armor can make the user fly into an uncontrollable rage, called the Storm.

DESCRIPTION
The Nalrobian Arc armor was made by a tribe of disgraced force sensitive Suchurs, cast out for fear of their abilities, for their god-king Komoda, belived to be a descendant Grammama Odie. The armor helps conduct the surchurs natural magnetic force, allowing for force lightning to be much stronger with much less energy expenditure. Surchurs already can't use or work on complicated electronics due to their magnetic scales, the armor bars the user from even getting within ten feet of most electrical device without destroying it. Being made completely of Neodynium the armor is very heavy and slightly slows down even bigger users. If the user can be tricked into triggering the Storm they may attack allies and they're own troops.

 

[Raiz]

Under Review.

 

[Raiz]

[member="Komoda"]

Please use the entirety of the format for armor, in sections where it doesn't apply (such as 'Canon Link') then place in 'Not applicable.'.

Also, the image link is a generic google images, please use this link. That is the direct link to the very image you provided.

 

[Komoda]

Thank you i will make edits accordingly

 

[Komoda]

[member="Raiz Australis"]

 

[Raiz]

[member="Komoda"]

You are still missing resistances.

Strengths: Amplifies force lightning abilities if worn by a force sensitive Suchur

Under 'Special Features' I would like you to explain how this is achieved.

 

[Komoda]

If you need a better explanation of the Suchurs abilities I could link the Suchur Species page. [member="Raiz Australis"]

 

[Raiz]

[member="Komoda"]

Material: Neodynium

Looking at the species page where it links directly to the real world mineral of Neodymium, upon reading through such I have found a rather blaring fault.

Neodymium, a rare-earth metal, was present in the classical mischmetal at a concentration of about 18%. Metallic neodymium has a bright, silvery metallic luster, but as one of the more reactive lanthanide rare-earth metals, it quickly oxidizes in ordinary air. The oxide layer that forms then peels off, exposing the metal to further oxidation. Thus, a centimeter-sized sample of neodymium completely oxidizes within a year.

Is the armour's material purely of Neodymium, or is it just the primary material? If the latter, could you please list the other pieces of material that it would be made out of.

 

[Komoda]

Didnt notice that, thank you for the help and patience. I'm making it a neodynium silver alloy. [member="Raiz Australis"]

 

[Raiz]

[member="Komoda"]

Lightsaber - weak

Under resistances, you need to give it one of the following in the formats

• Resistances (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.)

 

[Komoda]

Anything else? [member="Raiz Australis"]

 

[Raiz]

[member="Komoda"]

Thank you, been a pleasure working with you.

 

[Raiz]

Pending Factory Mentor Review.

[member="Jamie Pyne"], [member="Lily Kuhn"], [member="Zef Halo"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member=Komoda] [member=Raiz Australis]

Manufacturer: Badlands Legion

Minor factions and companies should be hyperlinked to their articles/submissions/pages when used as manufacturers.

 

[Komoda]

Hyperlinked Komoda and Badlands Legion

[member="Lily Kuhn"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved.