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MT-T28 Personal Transport Belt

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(Ignore the swords, only the belt) http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/115/8/7/mmd_newcomer_eren_jaeger_wip_2_by_esdras18-d62zkqu.png

Intent: A personal transport belt custom-ordered by Ardeo Sophos
Manufacturer: Mystic Tekk
Model: N/A
Affiliation: This device was custom-ordered for Ardeo Sophos in agreement that he could order these in quantity, as long as compensation is provided
Modularity: No
Production: Semi-Unique
Material: Carbon-Treated Durasteel plates, steel cables, emergency medpac, neural implant chip, vitals implant chip, master chip (only for master belt), emergency signal device, steel belt clip with thumb scanner, steel plates.
Description: There are two types of belts in this set, The Master belt and regular belt. The difference is that the Master belt can shut off the regulars with the master chip, and the master belt is painted green and mother-of-pearl, while the regular belts are brown and white. Universal Characteristics: All belts are made of carbon-treated durasteel, meaning they are slightly lighter and weaker than regular durasteel. The buckles are made out of regular steel, with thumb scanners, meaning only the person designated for the belt can wear it. There are two steel boxes on each side of the belt, containing thick steel cables which can support up to 250 lbs, 500 together at once. Cables are controlled by a neural implant chip. Therefore, the user can direct the cables through their mind, which can grip most surfaces. It is not recommended to grip electrical surfaces, as these cables can conduct electricity. There is also a vitals chip that reads the user's vital signs. If they reach a dangerous level, then the belt will send out a distress signal and inject the user with an emergency medpack (canon item).
 
[member="Silara"]
1. Everything is controlled by a neural implant chip
2. There is a thumb scanner
3. There is a built-in emergency medical system
4. There are not compressed gas canisters used to propel you around, this is achieved by retracting the cables, but not having them let go of the surface which they are attached to
5. These are not controlled by blades, but with the neural implant chip
6. There is a master belt that can control the others as well
I'm sure I could think of a couple more, if necessary.
 
@Vi'kas Mirtis
What I mean is, the general idea, the appearance, and the functions of this belt are identical - it is fine to take influence from other sources and make them your own in some way, but by smacking a picture of the belt things from Attack on Titan, explaining it to be nearly the same, and so on, it makes it too close for comfort to the original.

As such, this will be marked as denied for plagiarism and not adhering to the general idea of star wars.

3. Plagiarism will not be tolerated.

5. All submissions need to conform to the general idea of Star Wars. No Gundam, no Transformers.
-Factory Rules
http://starwarsrp.net/page/articles.html/_/role-play-rules/factory-rules-r19
If you feel this was unjust or wish for another shot, please make a request in the Second Chance thread in the Factory Discussion board.
 
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