Approved Starship MK1 DS Escape Pod

[Diysuperguy33]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To provide Dagobah Shipyard products with more modern escape pods.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: Here
• Restricted Missions: N/A
• Primary Source: Here

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Dagobah Shipyards
• Model: Mk1 DS Escape Pod
• Affiliation: Closed-Market
• Production: Mass-Produced
• Material: Durasteel Frame and plating, Transparisteel bubble window.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Escape pod.
• Length: 10m
• Width: 5m
• Height: 8m
• Armament: None
• Defenses: Low
• Squadron Count: None: 1
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: High
• Hyperdrive Class: N/A

STANDARD FEATURES
25 Standard Food Rations
36 hours worth of oxygen for 8 standard people (more oxygen available if less people and vice versa)
Long Range communication array
2 Emergency Survival packs
2 Engine units
DXR-4 Reactor

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
N/A

Strengths:

• Fairly fast and maneuverable

Weaknesses:

• No weapons
• Little hull-protection
• No shields

Description: N/A

 

[Progflaw99]

Under Review.

 

[Progflaw99]

Hi! I will be the judge reviewing this submission. I'll jump right in:

Armament: None Defenses: Low Squadron Count: None: 1 Maneuverability Rating: Extreme Speed Rating: High

Your ratings are currently too high for mass production. Every starship (or submission under the starship template) should start out average across the board, and either add a rating by lowering another or by lowering production or by adding a weakness that will directly effect the submission during use in RP. The "Extreme" rating on a mass produced vessel/vehicle is a bit too high. I could see High at most, if it is an escape pod meant to travel extremely fast. As such, a maneuverability rating of extreme seems out of place. Typically the purpose of an escape pod is to jettison the occupants and safetly descend to a planetary surface or at very least chart course and proceed in a straight line towards the next inhabitable planet. Please adjust these ratings to better reflect the purpose and production level of this escape pod and then I will take another look. Thanks!

[member="Lokthra Dawning"]

 

[Diysuperguy33]

[member="Rolf Amsel"]

Changed maneuverability to high.

 

[Progflaw99]

Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

[member="Jamie Pyne"], [member="Nadja Keto"], [member="Taryc Ap'Irae"]

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Approved.